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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 15:28 EDT
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i am excited about the upcoming press party. i am also wondering how sango and miro think they will get inu and kag together. they are both pretty stubborn it seems, so they might need to be nudged a bit. oh, about bankotsu and hitens hair. from what i've seen, they have similar lengths. but sometimes one looks longer than the other. it depends. in the manga, hitens looks longer and thinner, but maybe its just me. i hope ya have a new chap up soon and your virus troubles are solved. thanks.
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Reviewed By: MidsummerDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great stuff, I really like the story. One little, insignificant thing: salutation to the sun is a series of poses that involve nothing more strenuous than a really deep lunge. The pose you described is called plow. Tho it really is pretty intense. Other than that, this is faboo. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Answer to your question
Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 05:04 EDT
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In anime, it is sometimes difficult to tell how long someone's hair is. The length keeps changing, though unintentionally. In some pictures Hiten's braid looks longer, while in others, Bankotsu's looks longer. Since both their braids pass their waist, and seem to almost, if not, reach their bottoms (as fine as they may be), I would say that their braids are the same length. Great story, by the way. Pease update soon.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 04:53 EDT
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As always your writing is excellent. I will of course be waiting for the next update. Poor Kagome Sango and Miroku plotting she's never going to know what hit her. *hands a big plate of cookies over* eat those they'll keep you energized to write more. Enjoy and later
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. Update soon, I love this story.. and btw, I think Bankotsu's hair is longer.
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Reviewed By: Lil_Kag [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 16:43 EDT
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Thanks for the advertisement! You're doing good! I can't wait for the next chapter! I like InuYasha here! You're so funny and make such a good interaction between the characters! I like that way Inu/Kag relationship is going, is more realistic they are not just jumping into bed together, that good, it makes everything thta much exciting!
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Reviewed By: Amie On: October 04, 2005 00:27 EDT
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Thanks for the clarification! That makes sense, I guess; Sango is made of stern stuff. Two good chaps, I like the way you're setting things up. Can't wait for the party! I hope your computer is up and running at full capacity soon! (Hint hint!) Your writing is much appreciated.
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 19:56 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva NSI On: September 28, 2005 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it is so good you should finish
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: September 27, 2005 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this fic is cute! You've kept them all well in character, especially Inu with his "I'm a tough guy and a softie" thing going on. I think Sango being a workaholic is perfectly believable, so well done there. The fic is nice, the chapters are paced very well (although I do find myself wishing they went on forever..hehe) Seriosuly though, great so far, keep it up, can't wait for the next update:)
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 19:48 EDT
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^.^ Hello again. Bloody hell, you're good. I'm hoping that we can be friends now. I have to admit, you're writing is brilliant! This story has gotten me hooked and I've only just read the first part! I love it and I'm so hoping that you won't think me weird. I have to go...Mom is telling me to get off of the computer. I cannot believe how mean she's gotten since we've come to England to visit Grandma and Grandpa. >.
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 18:09 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Nx 69 On: September 26, 2005 08:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! another great chappie ... i really luving these....
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Reviewed By: Nx 69 On: September 26, 2005 08:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waow!!! cool story... luv it nice... kag masturbate... anyway good chapter i will read it all soon... till then
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! ^_^ I thought it was extremely funny that Sango was caught dancing around in her underwear! :P Awsome job! Anyway, please update again whenever you can! Until then, take care! ^_^
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