| "Abuse, Violence, and Love" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 20:17 CDT
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I LOVED IT!!!!! hehehheheehe it was bunch of twists and turns and i really enjoyed the story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 13:50 CST
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I realized something that i forgot to write last time i reviewed.....I know that im becoming a pain and i am very sorry about that......but i was wondering if you were going to write more....like when Inu comes back??? I know that it seems kinda obvious that you WOULD write another chapter, but i still have to know for sure, cause this story is just so damn awesome!!!!!!! I seriously am sorry if im bugging u..............Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 13:50 CST
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I realized something that i forgot to write last time i reviewed.....I know that im becoming a pain and i am very sorry about that......but i was wondering if you were going to write more....like when Inu comes back??? I know that it seems kinda obvious that you WOULD write another chapter, but i still have to know for sure, cause this story is just so damn awesome!!!!!!! I seriously am sorry if im bugging u..............Cheers
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 17:44 CST
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Yay I really liked your story. Um a little criticism: your fighting scenes could improve, you sometimes write words abbreviated, incorrectly. You should vary the ways you skip long periods, instead of always indicating it in a subtitle, and be careful, sometimes you write long periods when nothing happens. It can get boring, but yours weren't that long. Also, what happened to Kikyo and Naraku? If they get put to jail, indicate it a little more clearly. Apart from that, your story was original, broken people end up having wonderful lives and it's really joyful. Wow, this is the longest review I've ever written... lol
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 16:11 CST
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OMG how could u do that???????Oh i feel so bad 4 kag/inu.....the pain that they must feel.....i myself cried.. anyways great chaps....and keep writing :D:D:D :'(:'(:'(
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 01:07 CDT
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I love your story! ADD MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 11:55 CDT
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Loved the new chapters keep updating
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 16:36 CDT
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hey i loved your new chapters i hope you update soon keep up the good work. oh it took my a while to read it because i am sick and i can barely speak people have to read my lips you probably don't care about it well lata friend
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Title: nononono
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o no what is going on please update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooon thank you.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 20:48 CDT
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Awesome story....u seriously have to keep writing...i can't wait to find out whst next...
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel (NSI) On: October 03, 2005 17:22 CDT
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What the HELL happened? i loved the new chapters i hope you update real soon PLEASE oh please i wanna know what happened
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Reviewed By: inuyasha's broken follower On: October 02, 2005 20:16 CDT
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Ahem... UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!!! THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEA...that is all
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