| "Simple Complexity" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. I do so love action. It has been awhile since I first read it and I came back to see if it had been updated. Could you let me know if you have abandoned the fic? Thanks! ^_^ Snow
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Title: hazaah 4 u
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. Its very interesting and enjoyable--well written. I'll be waiting for an update. Please update soon (or when you feel like it just update eventually please!!!)
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Reviewed By: krity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:04 CDT
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hey! i love your story... but is that the end? cause when you look at the story it says it's completed... please let me know! i hope it's not the end!!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! Update soon!
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Title: It's fixed! ^-^
Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 00:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanx for telling me that I accidentally posted chap 1 for chap 5! Dang that must have been awful! Chap 4 ends in that terrible cliff hanger!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 00:06 CST
Comment/Review:
You've posted the wrong chapter 5 (you've posted chapter 1 again in place of chapter 5). Please fix it.
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: September 05, 2005 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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If you'd clean up your spelling and grammar, you'd have a great story. As it is, trying to figure out what word your meant to write (as opposed to the incorrectly spelled word) is really annoying. And you also mix up word a lot, like "except" and "accept".
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 03:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the reviews guys! Please post more if you can!!
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: September 04, 2005 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. Keep going. I love the sexual tension. You've got it building perfectly.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon thanks for writing another chapter to this great story of yours
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Title: loved it!!
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh!! i loved it added it to my fav. list and everthing, you have so gotta update soon. That cliff hanger was mean...:) ahh!!! i love it, update soon hurray!!:):):)JA
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. it was awesome. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes Oh my name is Nyah. I am 15 and i spend most of my time reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. and did i say your story is very great. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks alot. please update real soon. lata
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Reviewed By: Dave55man On: August 23, 2005 23:08 CDT
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Great and interesting story so far. just keep updating:)
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