| "Everyone says I love you" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bum On: June 25, 2002 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.M.G.!!!!!!!
This is a GREAT story, But I hate you for not adding the next ch.
P.S. Can I have Veggie while his not in use? |
Reviewed By: Bum On: May 23, 2002 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS SSSSSSOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!
I MEAN ITS THE BEST!
:P |
Reviewed By: hmmmmm On: May 02, 2002 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one thing isnt irresistable chapter page a tad big or is it just me? |
Reviewed By: nagake On: May 02, 2002 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, love the pairing! |
Reviewed By: bob On: April 27, 2002 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR FICCIE ROCKS |
Reviewed By: The almighty God of Cheese, Crackers and Communism On: April 25, 2002 02:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well done great fic. Write more soon plz!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Teddi On: March 25, 2002 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a 10 on everything because your ficcie rules! I love it! I can't wait for more! Hurry! Hurry! *giggle* ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Pickle On: March 05, 2002 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!!!!!! I HATE YOU, I WANT YOU TO FINISH THE STORY, I LOVED IT, THE BEST I HAVE READ IN MY LIFE, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
Reviewed By: VEGeta's pAssion On: February 22, 2002 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
actually the overall rating should have been 100!geeeeezzz that was kool the reason i put 9 (just think of it as 90) is because i dont enjoy sories that i cant finish sorry but thats me hahahaha well ive read like 1000000000000000090909 fanfics and yours is great!thanx id like to see goku and bulma date hehe plz think on that pllllzzz
from
vegeta's passion
goku:vegeta's what?
me:VEGETA'S PASSION!
goku:it shooda been gokus passion
Vegeta:shut the He** UP KAKARROT!!she admires me not you ya third class son of a saijin!!*smirks
goku:YOU SHUT UP PRINCE OF PANSEY'S!!
Vegeta:WHAT WHO THE HE** ARE YOU CALLIN PRINCE OF PANCEY'S?!
Goku:you!*mutters*duh dumb as* who else!
VEgeta:WHY I OUTTA..FINAL FLAAAAAAASH!!!!
Goku:oops AH! KaMEHhaMEEEHHH...HAAAAAAA!~!!!!!
me:WILL YOU GUYS STOP IT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Goku and Vegeta:NOOOO!!!!!
me:Fine ill call it VEgeta and gokus passion!!geeeeez!
Yamcha pops in:hey i think it should be called Yamchas passion...
every one on earth screams NOOOO!!!!!!! and kills yamcha
ha the end hey i just rote that right off the top of my head hahahahaa guess thats why its so lame hehehe
ok
VEgeta and Gokus passion *phew!* maaaaaiiiilllll meeeeeeeeeeeeeee
a_simmon@Bellsouth.Net |
Reviewed By: Hatti Lee* On: February 14, 2002 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee... This is a pretty cool place... I've never been here before. I know I've already review all 7 of these chapters elsewhere, but I decided that there is no limit to encouragement! ^_^ Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: MistyDea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2002 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha
A ten again!!! lol, Chante give me more. I thought if I reviewed enough you wouldn't have a choice lol
Lots of love
Misty! |
Reviewed By: Rogue On: January 30, 2002 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YEEAAAAHHH
This is great!
Come on! Spit out that next chap!!
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!
If Veggie makes a cameo it would be cool if he wallops old buddy Yamcha. He's an ex, maybe he still holds loyalties. (sorry - i just like to see veggie and yamcha go at it) |
Reviewed By: Shinigami2 On: January 13, 2002 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,
Soz bout not rating the rest I just can't stand that stuff though if i did u'd get a 10/10 anywayz ;)!. Yeh , well I really liked ur pairing of Goku/Bulma and though in the end Goku's like all sad I know this has a happy ending!. Well u keep writing and I'll keep reading!.
Bye :P!. |
Reviewed By: ~*~§ierra~*~ On: January 13, 2002 13:04 CST
Comment/Review:
NOTE: LATE TIME, I PUT 1 NICE B/C... N SO ON. BUT I DIDN'T MEAN 1 NICE REVIEW! I MEANT 1 NINE, NOT NICE! MY MISTAKE. LOL. |
Reviewed By: ~*~§ierra~*~ On: January 13, 2002 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only gave it 1 nice, n that was b/c the word sharp was spelled shapr. lol. other than that, get the next chapter out b4 i, uh, get mad!(*.~) im lovin it so far!
Ja ne! (as some ppl say. lol) |
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