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Title: Jello
Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 16:59 EDT
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Also I like the yoko and Kagome pair up better than heie |
Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 16:58 EDT
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I'm so confused, I remember reading this story before and I realized you edited out a lot of the 'good parts' lmfao have you posted the full story anywhere else? Still a favorite of mine, you actually made me like yu yu hakusho characters lololol |
Reviewed By: ME On: June 23, 2008 00:56 EDT
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Chapter one is currently covered by your end note. Fix it please.
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Title: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!i love that story PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!PPPLLLZZZZ!
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Title: jhj
Reviewed By: ygiuuihio On: November 04, 2007 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
gtgtt rr5 55 re5 6iu r56 r568 dvcz zewrydcrftcfgcf cftcft cfgu
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Title: hiei and kagome for ever
Reviewed By: kouga'sgirl On: October 16, 2007 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool. vary kool.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 14:20 EDT
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I like the idea of the story but it seems rushed, it's hard for me to picture the scenes in you story, i think if you took more time to write and describe the surroundings and what actually happened the story cold possibly be really good. And with all due respect~ Ookami san the animelover.
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Reviewed By: Larina On: June 15, 2006 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree, i love that Kikyo and Inuyasha are dead. The Hiei/Kag stuff is my fave and you do it really well. i cant wait to read the last Chappie
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:20 EDT
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OMG! Koenma is kicking her out of the country? Thats a twist. Update soon please and thank you for sending me the copy of the full chapter! ~DeathsAngel
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 11:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, nice update ... plz update a.s.a.p! i might have missed this; but what's or whos the pairing? i want it to b hiei and kagome ... as always! :)
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 17:07 EDT
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Can you send me the full chapter? I'd like to read the full thing. Thx ~DeathsAngel
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
three boys, ne? ^sigh^ boys are EVERYWHERE ... when your near kagome, u will definitely b near a lot of hot guys as well ... lolz! plz update a.s.a.p! by da way ... ... ... ... ... ... I WANT THIS TO BE A HIEI/KAGOME PAIRING! A third COULD come in ... but i'm mainly into kagome and hiei...
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 15:36 EDT
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This is an awesome story! Can't wait until you update it. I'm hopeing for a Hiei/Kags, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 16:25 EDT
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That's so... sad. Again, I'm really hoping for a HieiKag here, but I'll read it no matter what the pairing is.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 08:32 EDT
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my email is:Cinnamonroll_620@yahoo.com...if the reveiw doesnt say anything its:Devilangel620
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