Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you the 8 on punctuation because you really need a beta. The 5 on you spelling and grammar because you need a lot of punctuation and sentence speration... and quotes... you need help with quotes... this seems like it'll be a very enjoyable fic and it''s pretty original... I'm not trying to be mean, just some constructive critisism... so don't hurt me okay? *hides behind Bondage Trowa and Quatre*
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