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Reviewed By: PrincessRomia On: June 23, 2011 17:43 EDT
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Please post another chapter I was sad when i got to the day 10 and there wasn't anymore to read.... |
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 21:57 EST
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Well, I don't know how I ended up reading your fanficts, especially the DBZ ones. I could not stop reading "A Saiyajin's heart", but I think I did like this one better. When I read the summary, I thought the plot could not go far, I mean, how much it could happen under such circumstances? But I'm so glad I gave it a chance, since I really did enjoy this fic. I hope you finish it; it would be terrible if you don't. And, uh… I like canons, but I don't mind AU/ARs if they are respectful of the spirit of the characters. I could picture all the characters in the situations you described; therefore, I think they match with my expectations. Of course, it's very hard to imagine an almost sweet Vegeta (or Vejita, as you spell), but we have no way to know how he behaved with Bulma (Buruma) through their intimate moments. One thing we do know is that she does love him and he does cares for her, as shown at the Buu saga, and the other ones that followed. He always stayed by her side, although he never showed any kind of affection (at least not that I remember) to her. I always thought the Bulma-Vegeta romance (or whatever you call the thing they have) is the most passionate of all the pairings of DB, and also I do think they had some kind of bond, that was never explained. I will never forget how she felt a pain in her chest when he finally died, sacrificing himself for his family's sake (at the Buu saga), and she knew he was gone. It was so overwhelming, I almost cried! And, after that, he only agreed to fuse with Goku when he learned that she was eaten by the bad guy. Well, it was some years ago, but DBZ is still one of my all-time favorites. Ah, and… I'm sorry about the loss of your hard disk, I'm so glad you had your stuff posted in web pages, so you can get them back. Hope you do well, and keep the writing. I certainly look forward for some sequels and updates.
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it though their names are spelled different.
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Reviewed By: adfadfa On: December 14, 2005 23:32 EST
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whelp, only 4 more days to go... UPDATE!! lol i love this story, i like this vegeta, very horny and very sexy... ehhehe. Good job, i love this!
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Title: I luv this so far!
Reviewed By: Raccly e.r 17 On: September 19, 2005 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great start! I can't wait to start reading the other chap's!
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 15:46 EDT
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this new chapter is really good. i understand it is difficult to write when you haven't in so many years on this story. you tend to forget how to go on. but i must say you did a wonderful job. it was funny, romantic ,overall perfect. it lightened my day. keep on writing.
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Title: Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: megan1202 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 08:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is now one of my favorite fics out there! I really hope you finish this. I love this idea and the food fight was hilarious and hot all at once. Do you remember where that picture was of the bruise scene? I'd love to see it. Thanks and I hope you keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Sushi Fish On: September 01, 2005 11:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!I love it so far, Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. This is the best story I have even read. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (Not Signed In) On: August 31, 2005 07:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well they say good things come to those who wait and that is certainly true about this fic. I like all your stories, but this one truly is my favourite and I was near ecstatic to find it updated. So thanks for that ^_~
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 12:50 EDT
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This is going somewhere interesting! Just finnished chapter 1, so really gotta go, have to read the next! I love it.
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 08:11 EDT
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It made me so happy to finally read your story here on mediaminer again. off course, i have it stored on my computer and read it several times, but somehow reading it here makes it even better. Please update a new chapter, i know you can do it. i've been waiting for years to read more of this story, as it is my favorite one. don't ask me why, i don't really understand why, but it is. so please, write some more.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: August 27, 2005 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this story. I really hope you'll consider completing the story.
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Title: Continue!
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 14:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! This story rules!
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: Jasu-chan On: August 27, 2005 05:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only one chapter?! Damn right this is my favourite, I've missed it! Welcome back, Thin Lines! Loving this story all over again. XP
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