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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Seto! Get that sucker Toma. I can't beleive he threatened Mokuba. Someone needs to teach Kyo a lesson too. Great chpater. I can't wait to see Ryou's raction to all this.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good I guess they won't get any peace for a while.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your OCs a lot. I hope that Ryou and Seto will be able to relax for a little while. Good job.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 19:08 CST
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Continue soon and make Ryou better!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 18:20 CST
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This is making me cry!!! ;.; please update as soon as you can. You're a great writer.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great. I like it a lot. Poor Ryou. I don't understand why everyone is after him. I guess I do it's just to get at Seto but it's not fair. Poor Bakura.
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful. I was shaking the whole time. I liked the happy parts, but I also love how you just wrap the whole plot around their relationship. Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't understand the sadism and masochism thing before this. Thanks for clearing it up! I thought the same thing that the reviewer thought. Happy Halloween (if you celebrate it, if not, ignore me).
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad :'( update soon!
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not signed in) On: September 23, 2005 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't wait until you add another chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: September 22, 2005 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused. I think I skipped chapter 3. I don't remember reading it. But I had already read chapter four and I got an author alert and...oh never mind you should update soon! :) I've already read that last part!
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Reviewed By: jessara40k [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 03:42 CDT
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This is delicious. I liked: "I'm sure Bakura will handle them." - Yeah, by letting the Ishtars pin him to a wall and grope him Bakura's reaction to the way the Ishtars just deserted him to kiss Ryou. The way Marik kept on trying to fuck Bakura, getting in his way even though Ryou was in trouble...not that I want Ryou to have trouble, it was just funny. The way Ryou didn't tell Seto every detail of his problems, and the way Seto is determined to stay with Ryou, despite his fears. I did wonder why you skipped chapter 3 and went straight to chapter 4...did you mislabel it, or just miss part of it out when you were putting it up?
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Reviewed By: bjsuu```` On: September 13, 2005 04:15 CDT
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hey I love it I hoppe there rrrelatioon ship goeees well and the other people get a life.
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: September 12, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What?! How can I be the only one to have reviewed this great fic?! Next chapter you update I'll try and remember to login and add this fic to my favs. The beginning almost made me cry 'cause I thought something really bad was going to happen. But I'm really anxious to see what's gonna happen next!
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: September 03, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't get an email about the first chapter of this fic!! Oh, but I love it so far! I can see the angst coming. I liked the first two chapters a lot though. And they were so long too!! ^^ update soon.
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