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| "A Promise Fulfilled" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: TheSyn On: August 29, 2005 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all for a start. I need to read further into it to see if I really do enoy it. I'm pretty damn sure I will, though.
| Reviewed By: Jay Jay On: August 28, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. It was a pretty good fan fic. You know, I read this because I was asked by the author. My first time actually reading a fanfic. I'm not exactly a big fan of Inuyasha, but this story was bearable to read. IN fact, I rather liked it. It would make a good prolouge as stated by Miyuki. I'm sure there are many more good things to come. I gave an overall rating of 8, that was based off the fact that it was the majority of my ratings. I noticed a few grammar and spelling mistakes that I notified the author of, and of which have now been fixed. So I gacve an eight for style of writing, spelling and grammar, and the overall. The originality I gave a six because it was absed off of a premade series and characters. And the same for the enjoyment factor. It was okay to read, but I wasn't greatly enthralled. Maybe it was just becasue of my dislike for the actual anime show. So I hope this explains my ratings properly. Thanks.
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