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Title: UNPREDICTABLE
Reviewed By: sesshywife [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it so sweet and loving and i just adore the love scenes i taught i figured out your story from the begging but ohhh did you prove me wronge your a realy good author keep going with your stories.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beautiful story indeed. I enjoyed every moment of it and I recommend it to other readers! It had a great plot and I like what you did with the story, even if it did take a while for Kagome to finally be introduced. I think your chapters could be fleshed out a little more with more description that would improve the quality of your work. Other than that I liked your style. There were,however, numerous spelling and grammar errors. I suggest you correct them to improve the quality of your story. Overall I enhoyed your story very much and desite some technical issues it was enjoyable to read. I hope to read more of yoru work in the future and I hope you show more improvement as you mature as a writer. ^^
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: November 30, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading this, and I have to say that I love it! It my favorite kind of ending. And I'm talking about the wedding, not the "real" ending! I'm going to see if I can find your next story!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: IY Star Spectator On: November 14, 2005 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont mean 2 sound lyk a party pooper but u wrote a few things wrong but i still love ur stories.they're fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and the story is over. sniff. i definitely think this was your best so far, cant wait for chapter 3 of 'a key to my heart'.
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Title: a review...
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this chapter, and I'm sad this story is almost at it's end. Just like that saying 'all good things must come to an end' right? Well anyways Great writing, and I can't wait for the epilogue. The end is near...
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 00:12 CDT
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yay!!!! lovely ending. ^_^ and really nice story. hehehe...good job hun!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: October 16, 2005 14:30 CDT
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hey!! another great update. xD and yeah, you're right...i suppose in a way, kagome really didn't make a mistake. i'm just the kind of person who one i meet a guy that i fall hard for...it really takes me a long time to forget about him. :P lol...but i'm glad she's not marrying kouga! ^_^ hopefully things still will work out between her and inu! more soon i hope!
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Title: a review...
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I'm sorry you felt forced to write this, I don't think writers should be forced to write what they don't want to. But if it helps, I personally LOVED this chapter, and am anticipating what will happen next. Again this story is one of my favorites, and I can't wait till the next chapter...
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Title: a review...
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I am wereblood, I use that name when I'm not signed in and am too lazy to do so. And I have you on both my favorites list, author, and story. Anyways great chapter, I knew it would be Kouga. It's kind of sad though right now in the story, and it's good too because I guess thats just part of a great story in the end huh? Okay, I can't wait for the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 16:13 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON"T GO BACK!!!!!!!!!! *sobs* ok that was sad. KAGOME messed things up this time! >.< ah well...such is drama...x_x hope you update soon soon soon soon soon!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh so thats why...i wish ontario would go on strike....i want to work on my story so badly......Aw you cant leave them like this! Inu and Kags are meant to be together!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: October 15, 2005 10:36 CDT
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well, i don't remember you saying who the fiance was in the previous chapter. anyway, update soon!
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Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 22:14 CDT
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P.S. I can't wait till the next chapter, I LOVE this story... -TrinityK (aka Wereblood)
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Title: chapter14
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, when I checked my email and saw that you updated I was excited. Something to get the stress of the day forgotten. So as I began redaing I was really excited. I thought this would be a happy, love filled chapter, but I guess reality isn't like that. Even if it is fiction. All I can say is that I can't wait till the next chapter for more development on this oncoming rain storm. Let me guess, is the rebound fiancee Kouga? I hope it's not Naraku, cus that's just whack... ;) lol... Really though, this chapter was good, the beginning of what's really coming...
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Reviewed By: SUGI On: October 14, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE REALLY SOOND ITS LOOKIN SO GOOD
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Reviewed By: gweien On: October 14, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good update really soon or u are evil
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Reviewed By: allieas On: October 14, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so good update really soon
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: October 14, 2005 19:20 CDT
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whoa!!!! didn't see that one coming. *sighs* talk about twist... but it would really have been asking for a bit too much if they just came back together and everything...:P love the update. more soon!!!! XD
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow lots of updates recently. have a cookie! i wish i had the kind of time, my story should be updated on monday. i love your storyline, it is so dramatic and the conflict is excellent. i think i know who Kagome is marrying! but i wont spoil it for the people who haven't figured it out yet, all i can say is inuyasha is going to feel betrayed if im right. keep up your update schedule!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Wereblood On: October 14, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I thought this chapter would be Kags and Inu. Oh well great chapter, even though it was kind a like a filler. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter, you said it would really be the big reunion right? I can't wait, the anticiaption's killing me. Anyway, yes I understand the story now after before, I LOVE this story, it's one of my favorites. I'm actually a mediaminer member, but everytime I read your updates I'm not signed in, and me and my lazy self... lol, well till next chapter...
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 23:35 CDT
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hey!! another great update. xD I can't wait for him to see kagome again!! please update soon! you're doing a great job with the timing between your updates btw...:P lol. nice nice nice. :)
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Title: oh!!!
Reviewed By: baka-mai On: October 13, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHH!!! You must update soon, i just have to see (or more like read) what happens next!!! AHHH!! Stupid cliff hanger. I keep comming up with all these scenarios that would go along with this story so great and i just whant to see what happens next!! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!! I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY!! :) Ja Ne -Mai
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (NSI) On: October 13, 2005 15:12 CDT
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lovin your work as always. keep it up! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 00:03 CDT
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yay!! again, you updated quickly. :) i'm glad. nice chapter, and it was really nice of miroku to show inu support. can't wait for the next update! he shall meet kagome again in the next one, ne? :) hope so!
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Reviewed By: SUGI On: October 12, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO SAD UPDATE SOON REALLY SOON KAGOME BETTER NOT BE MAD AT INUYASHA FOR LEAVING HER IN THE NEXT CHAPTERS:]
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Title: hurray
Reviewed By: baka-mai On: October 12, 2005 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hurray you update!! Oh man that was great but know im stuck wondering what will happen next...please oh prity please update real soon:) Ja Ne -Mai
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Title: love it.
Reviewed By: Wereblood On: October 12, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I was confused at the beginning of the last chapter, but I got it. Wow, over a year, thats a long time. But YAY! we get to see Kagome again next chapter, hopefully. Or soon anyways. I wonder how the reunion will go. Anyways, GREAT chapter, and once again I LOVE your story, and I still can't wait till the next update. ;)
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 16:54 CDT
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w00t!! update!!! nice stuff. i can't believe it's been a year already! can't wait to see what you have planned for this! :) update again soon pleasy!
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Title: hurray!!
Reviewed By: baka-mai On: October 12, 2005 16:32 CDT
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I love it and i do hope that you update soon again!!! Please do hurray and update!! Im freaken hooked!! Hurray!!! lol. Kay so yah update!! ;P Ja Ne -Mai
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