| "Day and Night" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sexy_bytch_93(nsi) On: September 23, 2005 22:12 CDT
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Bring it back, Bring it back. Here you go!!
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Reviewed By: SoulsAir [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 18:19 CDT
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HEY!!! Please finish this story i really got into it its hilarious!
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to write more.I love this story,it's so cool.It caught me with the gangster stuff.I like it alot.Please write more
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMMFG! You have to keep writing this Goddamned fanfiction! It's like my freaking favorite on this site! Damn, that's some funny shit in there! Love it! Keep writing!!! L8ers! (^ o ^)/~
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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dis iz like popp'n it to a Inu-version of Honey or someth'n like dat. The story color is very unique. U spell ur slang diffrently then i would but it repeasents where ur from when u do. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kurai Hitomi On: September 10, 2005 01:44 CDT
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Hey your stories pretty good.. im really getting into keep writing!
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Title: To the Readers
Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 22:45 CDT
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I hope you guys are reading some of the reviews. This is from me, the author. I'm having a hard time getting your reviews. The site won't let me see it on my laptop. But I have found out that if I use someone else's compy I can read it. So it might be better if you just email me your moments. Thanks for reviewing.
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Reviewed By: ReadMePlz On: September 06, 2005 22:51 CDT
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Plz PlZ Plz PLz PlZ Write more of the hippie dance groove storie. i really grooves me.
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Reviewed By: WowBowWow On: September 06, 2005 22:29 CDT
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Bring in the chappies plz
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Title: tight!!!!
Reviewed By: logged out(Alisha) On: September 03, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK YOUR STORY IS TIGHT!!! YOU GO HEAD WHICH YOUR BAD SELF!!!I CANT WAIT UNTIL YOUR NEXT CHAPTER !!! keep writing and i'll keep reviewing!!!
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Reviewed By: sexy_bytch_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 13:27 CDT
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Plz write more. 'Cause dis story is de bomb.
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Title: Language
Reviewed By: Offend On: September 03, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should take Nigga OUT because once I got to there I was offend. It's just rude. I could enjoy the story better if you wasn't trying to use those terms.
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Reviewed By: JazzieNizzle On: September 03, 2005 08:08 CDT
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I really liked this story, it is the first of the kind that i have read. I LOVE Rin/Sess as a couple of when you put together this slang story, you've made me realize that this is one of the best Rin/Sess stories I've read, granted there aren't that many in the first place. The down side is you have a lot of grammer mistakes and maybe you should read over your story once before you update, I still will be waiting for the next chapter, update soon, okies?
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 11:21 CDT
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This fic is dope, lol. Yeah, I'm a big ol' cracker, but I live in Louisiana, and almost everything Steve Harvey ever said about black folk applied to most southerners ((except rednecks, lol)). This is really good... The only fic I have ever seen a black person incorporated into was by inugrrl, and it was nice. It's still so funny to think of little japanese Rin talkin shit with a big ol dude, lol. I love this fic! email me when you update! :)
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 11:13 CDT
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I know what Ford really means for her, Found On Concrete Dead..........I think you mean Found on Road Dead, honey, lol. XP It's cool though. I'm really digging on your fic. I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I am enjoying it. Thinking of little Rin as a thug is hillarious, and definitley different. :)
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