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Reviewed By: Stray [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 05:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have read the fic and enjoyed it very much. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. I hope Relena learns the truth soon or else she is not going to object against this marriage-thing and end up unhappy (I just can't see something like this stopping those two, especially if the bride is someone they know). But to be honest, the only way I can see people agreeing to Wufei's plans is if this strange mark of his tells them that Heero is the one and not her. I liked Mariemaia very much. She is evil incarnate. O.o And I can't wait to learn just how old Duo really is. Or what this power behind the mark really means. Btw, I think you got Hilde's name wrong (wikipedia says it's Schbeiker. Funny name.). Wufei's birthday is supposed to be December 12 (same source). And there is a slight continuity error: at the beginning you say that the track team tried to recruit Wufei for years (which implied they didn't succeed) and then in a later chapter (thirty-something I think) you say he has been on the track team. I'm looking forward to reading more! Good work. :)
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: April 19, 2007 11:23 EDT
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Wow poor Wufei and i want to kick everybody who is mean to Wufei!!!^^ Please continue and update as soon as possible!^^
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 11:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good thing Heero smacked Wufei, because I was about to do it myself. How could he say that with Releena there? How rude. And I know I was flipping out about her earlier, but she's an angel compared to Mariemaia. It could be worse. At least she hasn't attempted to kill anyone. And has Releena given up on Heero? Because she's acting like she has a crush on Wufei...how interesting. I love seeing Heero jealous; i'm sorry but I do. And I'm wondering what kind of vibes Quatre's getting from our least favorite redhead. Poor Q. The drama never ends. Please update soon. If I come up with any other questions, I'll review again. Or just mail you. We'll see. I'm loving this story more and more...
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: April 11, 2007 17:14 EDT
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Wow i really liked it!! No Duo is nice Please he is nice!!!Please update soon!!^^
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Title: hurry,hurry!
Reviewed By: Guardian 2024 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! another part! *excited, excited* Ne... I vote for another lemon sometime soon!! *hentai* ^___^;;
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, poor Fei! And what happened with Duo? Whay can't he be trusted? That wasn't him with the sword, because he would be too small to use it effectively. He didn't have something to do with the attack itself, right? And how did Heero fare after the roof collapsed on him? And I just noticed that we've never really seen much from Trowa's POV. I just thought that was interesting. From most people's, even Relena and Hilde's, bu tnot his. I'd kinda like to see his thoughts...if that came out right...
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: March 26, 2007 18:25 EDT
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Cool! Finally info about Wufei's early life. The thing with Duo sounds interesting, as well as how Heero and Wufei are going to get together, the marriage, and whatever happened to Millardo and Trieze. I love this (really who would panic over 60 chapters of this wonderful fic) and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(nli) On: March 19, 2007 22:39 EDT
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DUO! -SOBS- NO! I hafta love Duo, sometimes. But damn, this story is awesome. I have a question though, why Duo? Why not Quatre or Trowa? Does it always have to be the braided idiot? Never mind, don't answer that question. Ummm...... Who is Fei-Bear gunna marry now? I mean, his would be wife is kinda...dead. So who is left that is 100% Chinese? Not sally is it? She ish blond. Not 100% Chinese. No No No No No. Lol. I am on Anti-Depressant meds, and I ate alotta chocolate. I luv your story though. One thing however, it does seem to change it's mind half way though. One point one thing happens, and then the next chappy comes and it turns into something different. It's like huhwha? Good going tho. Can't wait for nother update. Ja!
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Reviewed By: chekiita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far, it's original, new and fresh!! I've spent the entire day reading it and can't wait to see what happens next. I have soo many questions but I believe in letting the story tell it self so thank you for sharing your story and to encourage you to continue.
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Reviewed By: ttmy On: March 15, 2007 12:43 EDT
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eeeeehhhhh???? what did wufei see? gah. i need to know!
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave off there?! At least Wufei understands a bit more of what's going on. Poor baby! And Heero...this could get even more complicated than it already is! And eveyone seems so stuck on destiny... I want ot know what Wufei saw...most of it probably wasn't good. Please update when you can! And I'm glad Hilde and Duo are back together for now.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want Wufei's questions answered so badly! I wanna know! And 'Fei's grandfather seems like a nice person, unlike Wufei's aunt. He might understand, to a degree...I'm nervous about what's coming up though...I don't know why, but 'Fei probably won't like it. And I just feel so bad for Quatre...it's not fair! Maybe Heero should have a little talk with Trowa... Please update soon! I wouldn't go so far to say my life revolves around HB, but I REALLY, REALLY look forward to it...
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: February 20, 2007 16:32 EST
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Yay, we finally get to meet his grandfather, though I have the feeling some things are not going to be...fun...to dicuss (like Heero). Zhao was interesting (I take it from the dialogue with him and how he dealt with Relena he is not going to be like Bai Ling in Evening the Odds, which I read at your website and was a fantastic story by the way). I am looking forward to much conflict with him in the future. I am also curious if anything more will happen with Trieze and Millardo. I still love this story and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: February 05, 2007 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! I hope you update again soon! Releena is the chosen bride, isn't she? If she is, then maybe 'Ro and 'Fei can still be together. Kinda like a mistress, but as a guy. You know? Then 'Leena could have her own little afair too. I really want 'Ro and 'Fei to stay together! They are such a great couple, especially in this story. Well, hopefully this helps to motivate you to write! Update soon, please! ^_^
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Title: Mitsuru Aki
Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 12:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, poor Q! And I liked how you described Trowa as clueless. Because he is. And his little innocent charade was cute. I think you misspelled 'innocent' though, but that's not a big deal. I had a HUGE grudge against Trowa though when he tattled on Fei and Heero. That was a big no-no. But I'm glad he realized his mistake and thought things over. I really hope Trowa and Quatre get together. And Duo should have a 'talk' with Trowa. Heero was right in thinking that, even though it confused him at the time. And I honestly don't know what to think about Duo. He seems to be both against them and encouraging them. I'm slightly suspicious of him now. I'm also anxious to see what Wufei's grandfather is like. Hopefully he's more open minded than Fei's aunt. And good for Fei for standing up to that woman. She had it coming. And just to let you know, I'm thinking of shipping Relena off to some barren planet where we'd all be better off without her. She's bugging me, and she BETTER NOT get any answers before my Fei. Seriously. And if Fei has to marry Relena for some foreign relations crap, it will be justifiable homicide on Heero's part. And why is Fei so special...? Was there a prophecy or something?
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