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Reviewed By: chekiita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far, it's original, new and fresh!! I've spent the entire day reading it and can't wait to see what happens next. I have soo many questions but I believe in letting the story tell it self so thank you for sharing your story and to encourage you to continue.
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Reviewed By: ttmy On: March 15, 2007 12:43 EDT
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eeeeehhhhh???? what did wufei see? gah. i need to know!
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave off there?! At least Wufei understands a bit more of what's going on. Poor baby! And Heero...this could get even more complicated than it already is! And eveyone seems so stuck on destiny... I want ot know what Wufei saw...most of it probably wasn't good. Please update when you can! And I'm glad Hilde and Duo are back together for now.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want Wufei's questions answered so badly! I wanna know! And 'Fei's grandfather seems like a nice person, unlike Wufei's aunt. He might understand, to a degree...I'm nervous about what's coming up though...I don't know why, but 'Fei probably won't like it. And I just feel so bad for Quatre...it's not fair! Maybe Heero should have a little talk with Trowa... Please update soon! I wouldn't go so far to say my life revolves around HB, but I REALLY, REALLY look forward to it...
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: February 20, 2007 16:32 EST
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Yay, we finally get to meet his grandfather, though I have the feeling some things are not going to be...fun...to dicuss (like Heero). Zhao was interesting (I take it from the dialogue with him and how he dealt with Relena he is not going to be like Bai Ling in Evening the Odds, which I read at your website and was a fantastic story by the way). I am looking forward to much conflict with him in the future. I am also curious if anything more will happen with Trieze and Millardo. I still love this story and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: February 05, 2007 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! I hope you update again soon! Releena is the chosen bride, isn't she? If she is, then maybe 'Ro and 'Fei can still be together. Kinda like a mistress, but as a guy. You know? Then 'Leena could have her own little afair too. I really want 'Ro and 'Fei to stay together! They are such a great couple, especially in this story. Well, hopefully this helps to motivate you to write! Update soon, please! ^_^
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Title: Mitsuru Aki
Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 12:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, poor Q! And I liked how you described Trowa as clueless. Because he is. And his little innocent charade was cute. I think you misspelled 'innocent' though, but that's not a big deal. I had a HUGE grudge against Trowa though when he tattled on Fei and Heero. That was a big no-no. But I'm glad he realized his mistake and thought things over. I really hope Trowa and Quatre get together. And Duo should have a 'talk' with Trowa. Heero was right in thinking that, even though it confused him at the time. And I honestly don't know what to think about Duo. He seems to be both against them and encouraging them. I'm slightly suspicious of him now. I'm also anxious to see what Wufei's grandfather is like. Hopefully he's more open minded than Fei's aunt. And good for Fei for standing up to that woman. She had it coming. And just to let you know, I'm thinking of shipping Relena off to some barren planet where we'd all be better off without her. She's bugging me, and she BETTER NOT get any answers before my Fei. Seriously. And if Fei has to marry Relena for some foreign relations crap, it will be justifiable homicide on Heero's part. And why is Fei so special...? Was there a prophecy or something?
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Reviewed By: ball of aggravation On: January 29, 2007 08:02 EST
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still love your story. :)
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Reviewed By: Sassenach_Gaijin On: January 28, 2007 07:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you have not heard this enough so I'm going to tell you again... YOU ROCK!! I was a little unsure of the story at first but gave it a chance... now after sitting here for a couple hours... searching for the next page I'd say I'm a little more than hooked. If you don't have more for this story I'm going to be very disappointed. I don't really know what to do with myself now that there isn't anymore to read. Please I beg you... MORE!!!!
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Title: elleto
Reviewed By: Shikoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 22:14 EST
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HUZZAHNESS dude, i kept getting little damn emails about you updating mystery man, that i was getting ready to boot you off my alarm list and check in on you manually. and then i felt something shrivel up inside me at the thought of that, and decided against it. WELL HUZZAAAHH it rawks, just as usual. i like this wufei, my feiry spitfire, bull-terrier moron. OHOHOHO! i kind of want it to go all the way to the wedding, (coughrelenacoughanyone?cough) and then wufei and heero sharinng hidden, shadowed moments of lust unrestrained *desire*. (what, darling? why no, i always end up naked on the couch while trying to watch TV...and please ignore the naked bodyguard too) OH NOOES TEH SCANDALZ but yes. i eat scandals right up. >:D keep at it! i'm salivating for more!
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Reviewed By: SGM On: January 24, 2007 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is extremely good. I just wanted to point out one tiny and mabye nit-picky flaw. In the middle of the (lovely and gorgeously written) lemon scene (love how they're uncertain and figuring things out, they just seem cute) you wrote "Prostrate" which means to lie flat or prone, and I'm pretty sure you meant 'prostate' (no second r) which is a male gland near the urethra. Otherwise it is simply magnificent.
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Reviewed By: Katsuya On: January 17, 2007 10:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is such a trip! I don't even know what to think of him anymore. And I feel so bad for Quatre...he still likes Trowa but 03 doesn't even seem to notice...oh boy. And I love long stories, so don't worry about having so many chapters. Do whatever you need to do so that you're satisfied with the story. Looking forward to your next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ubiquitous On: January 14, 2007 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, PLEASE UPDATE! Soon, preferably, because this fic is honestly one of the greatest I have ever had the pleasure of coming across. Your characterization is amazing and I love the way you took the original GW cast and incorporated them into a wonderfully plausible and completely unprecedented AU. The storyline is excellent, the characters and their relationships are complex and addictively engaging, and the way you build up to the love scenes is fantastic! lol, this fic is definitely one of the few rare jewels to be found out there in the world of fanfiction, and I'm glad you've taken the time to write so much. Please update soon! ^___^
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: December 20, 2006 11:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful wonderful fic. I don't mind that it's long it's worth it and makes it so much more interesting. I love that sence so much it wasn't over done nor under done it was perfect.
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: December 20, 2006 03:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I like this fic! I especially liked how you wrote the lemon. With them both being ackward and all, but they're hormones dictating what to do. I also like how Duo gives them the chance anyway, even though everyone knows how it'll end. Poor Trowa though. Confused little soldier that he is. Hopefully he learns from this though ^_~ update soon please!
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