| "By the Hand of Destiny: Book One; The Journey to Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 13:34 CST
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Yet another rather *cough* Interesting chapter *sdrop* In any case I found a few errors (one sentence someone ends on one paragraph and starts on another. I think it was the part where Destiny was noting how Dilly noticed her fighting skills and her exotic coloring.)
And in the fifth paragraph u have. "This man confuses and scares me." twice. But otherwise it was very good...^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 13:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I give you a perfect ten for everything! The style of writing was very enjoyable and once again no s/g errors. Enjoyment factor is also a ten. It was kind of romantic if u ask me ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IMHO You have a very good style of writing and again I didn't see any s/g mistakes. There's enough detail but not too much to making the story boring. The plot also seems very original and creative. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 12:54 CST
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The story has an interesting beginning and I couldn't find any grammar/spelling errors. Good job so far ^.^...
Dilly's girl didn't u write that one story about three kingdoms,Hitomi,Van and some other guy? *Sdrop* I mite just be mistaking u for someone...gomen |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 16:41 CST
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I have to admit to not being overly knowledgable about escaflowne, but it didn't seem to matter when reading this. I was hooked on every word, and the descriptions were well placed, but not overly dwelt on. Good work, and yay can't wait for the lemon! |
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