| "Life's Changes: Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just absolutely wonderful! I wonder why Kikyou dumped Inu though? She really is a bitch in your story, lol. And Kagome dropping more than 100 lbs! And Inu has a kid, that's sooooo kawaii! I wonder who the mother is? I really enjoy your writing style, especially the segments where we get Kagome's point of view. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it! update sooon!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetnsourgirl001 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 21:50 CDT
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love the story she lost 120 pounds i think well cant wait till update
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Reviewed By: vivi55 On: September 02, 2005 12:21 CDT
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O.o how much has Kagome already lost? You discribed her in the 2 chapter as if she had her... well, 'normal' figure. anyway, just wanted to tell you that I like your story ;)
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