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| "Speechless" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 08:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was a good story, however it ended a little to quickly and nothing was really resolved between her and sess in fact she's only known him for 2 days.
| Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an awesome and imaginative story I absolutely loved it!!!!! oh please tell me there will be a sequel!!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: June 10, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahhh!(crying out waterfalls of tears)Mujitsu said she adored my reviews...I feel so special(Crys some more)Inu:(sitting in a boat on a sea of tears in my room)Would you quit crying already?! Your acting like a kid.(Holds up an umbrella as more tears come)ME:So what if I act like a kid, Mujitsu just made my day!(Trys to regain composure)I just want to say this, before I start cryin again, I LOVED this story. I just had the best time reading it. It made my day better reading it, especially since I was having a bad day. There were finals, college entrance exams, argueing friends, a complaining hanyou, and- Inu:Hey, there was no ramen left, and that smelly wolf came by and tried to steal you from me to top it all off!!ME:The point is... I had alot on my hands at the time. So reading your marvelous works made my day a little less stressful.Inu:That and the back massage I gave you.ME:(remembering the day)Yeah,Gooood Times(nods head)Whoa! Where were we? Oh, yes...(clears throat) Your glorious fanfic helped ease my day, needless to say. I had oodles of fun reading it to the very end. I just love the way you have it in all of your fanfics the way Sesshy is so protective of Kagome. Just like Inuyasha is with me.Koga:(runs in, slides to a hault)Kamine[me], you should know by now that I'll protect you twice as much as that filthy mutt face over there can even hope to.ME:That's a very sweet offer Koga but, how can I say this? Inu:Get lost you mangey wolf!! Ever since Kagome left, you've been crawling around here to see if Kamine will give you some of attention. It ain't going to work, she's my mate, not yours. As in uno, dos, no tres!(translated:one,two, no three) ME:Now Inuyasha,be nice.(Thinking to self)Geez, I'm starting to sound like Kagome!(Outloud)Guys! You're getting me distracted! Anyways, Mujitsu, I- Koga:You're talking to Mujitsu!? Hi, Mujitsu! Inu:Get away from my mate and the computer screen, you baka, you're gettting her distracted.Koga:Who says she doesn't like me by her side watching her type?Inu:KOGA!! Get away from her!Koga:Make me!Inu: Thought you'd never ask(grabs the tetsusiaga)Koga:This will only take a second, baby.(strokes my cheek, turn towards Inu)Inu:get your hands off of her!!(they fight in a large dust cloud)ME:O-okay? While those 2 battle it out, this would be a great time to point out to all you non-reviewers, that unless you want to end up like those 2 over there(points, the 2 clawing each other)I suggest you better review nicely about Mujitsu's fanfics, or else! You won't be sorry when you read any of her lovely stories, they're all so good.Sesshy:(walks in)Remember, I don't like it when pathetic humans make my Mujitsu upset.ME:(looks over at Inu & Koga)I guess I better go and break those 2 apart before-(floor starts creaking, the 2 stop fighting)Koga:That doesn't sound good.Inu:You think?(Floor cracks)Sesshy:I hate you...(floor caves in)ME:INUYAHSA, KOGA!!(climbs out from under the rubble)Both:He started it!!Sesshy:(sitting ontop of a pile next to the other 2 demons, says to me)Teach you for letting demons inside your room.ME:(rolls up a spared newspaper, forehead throbbing, clenches teeth.Starts smacking the paper against my hand threateningly)Sesshy:(wide eyed)Run! All 3:(Run out screaming)ME:(Chasing after them, hitting them all on the head w/the rolled up paper)I suggest you all Review, like I said, or else you'll end up like these 3! (Thwack!)
| Reviewed By: Calera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fic though i wish it was longer =( you started off with a very original ideal and with so many fics out there thats very hard. *gives you a cookie* looking forward to reading more of your stories ^-^
| Reviewed By: cma832744 On: November 01, 2005 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I like how you have Inu's character. It's different. Nice to see unique work like that! Plz update soon! LaterDayz
| Reviewed By: sakurasyth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It is so weird to have Inuyasha be deaf. I used to know some sign, but I haven't done it in years. I think it is such a graceful language. Well, keep up the great work and I hope for an new chapter soon!
| Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 11:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sighs* Kouga. Yay! *Sesshomaru growls and I glance over at Sesshy* What!? You're all after Kagome! Let me get mine! *mutters under breath* Jerk. I better finish this review real quick before Fluffy over there kills me. *another growl* Like I've said before, I think the concept for this story is amazing! You've managed to write it extremely well and make it believable! *claps* I ish so proud! One suggestion, *giggles* you can always put in an orginal character who happens to hook up with Kouga! *Sesshy cracks his knuckles* I NEVER SAID NAMES! *winks at Mujitsu* I'm sure you catch my drift. *runs away from Fluffy* Leave me alone! You can't have two women! So, I'm going after Kouga! *flips him the bird* Whatcha gonna do about it? TBC...
| Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 12:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know what I'm going to say...GREAT CHAPTER! And yay! My acronym "FROP" is offical! Oh, you should have a fanclub, duh!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: September 17, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back! First of all, I'm glad to hear that my reviews brighten your day! Second, if you want to be called Sesshoumaru's Mate, more power to ya! I love the way Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru still insult each other, but that's nothing new! But, it's still funny reading about the way they insult each other through sign language. I could die from laughing, because I can actually picture them doing that! Also, good luck keeping to your writting schedule. From one writer to another, that's the hardest thing to do. I can't wait for Ch. 4 for "Speechless" and Ch.12 for "FROP", I'm going to try not to think about it to much. . .Hey Inuyasha, What time is it? Inu: 12:37 pm Pacific, why? Me:(takes out calculator)That means only. . .1 week, 2 hours, and 37 minutes till I can come back on the internet to read more!! Inu:(rolls eyes)Me:1 question for ya, Mujitsu. When you say your updating every other Saturday and Friday, does that mean you'll be updating both stories on the same week, or are you going to update just one of your stories a week and not both? Also, I just reviewed on "FROP", which I think is a awsome story. And to all you people who haven't reviewed or haven't read any of Mujitsu's GREAT fanfics, I send a death ray to you all.(evil glare)Inu:(hides behind Sesshy)Sesshy: Why are you hiding behind me? She's a human girl. Inu:She's scary when she's mad. Sesshy:(rolls eyes)If you non-reviewers don't review soon, I'll make you review.(flexes his claws)Me:Good boy,Sesshy!Review!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: September 12, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the way you had the story written out! The way you have Naraku as the murderer, and how Kagome and Inuyasha couldn't talk.(Much love to all you deaf and mute people out there!) And I love it that Sesshoumaru is a good guy, not to mention a cop, I bet he would look so hot in one one of those police uniforms. Inuyasha: Hey!! You're my mate. . .not his! Me: I know! I just think your brother looks cute sometimes. Inuyasha: *growls* Me: I'm just teasing you. I love you, besides Sesshoumaru belongs to Mujitsu. Inuyasha: Feh! Me: I think it's needless to say but,Hurry and write more. I looovvveee this story!!!
| Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: September 08, 2005 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
See what happens when I don't pay attention? I lose my "First Reviewer" spot. Grr. I REALLY like this story. I think the premise is going to make for an interesting story. So, like with all the other stories, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
| Title: awesome-O!!
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow I have never read a story like this...it is refreshing to see a new idea. Congratulations you are creative, lol. Thank you for the new story update ASAP. ;] Aurora
| Reviewed By: Anonymous person On: September 02, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... this is awesome...... Please continue!
| Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!! the story is somthin new and i like it so please update!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 07:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please keep writing. I love the way this story started, and can't wait for more. It's an interesting twist, Kagome being mute. Keep going.
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