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Title: BOYA!
Reviewed By: devilsincarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOYA! That was so...I cant think of a word that was fantastic though, he was worried for nothing. And the moral of this stroy people can chose thier own destiny no matter what fate has supposdly chosen. Great fiction look forward to more of your writings Ja-ne.
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Reviewed By: Dead_ACPF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your so mean to us! T-T I guess you have the choice to be mean since your the writer and we are the readers...Please write the next chapter soon,I would try to make a guess to what your gonna write, but I'm not creative. I need you to write it. I'm so helpless! Oh well I'm sure you won't torchure us for long it can't be that pleasurable....or can it? Oh well, I shall wait calmly. Please write as soon as you can if you have some time on your hands. Boy do I sound annoying. Well till you write again. *walks away trying to remain quiet* Oh man I hate not being able to stay calm!
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Reviewed By: CeeKari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic! It's not often that I read a lemon and I just want to yell, "Cuuuute!" but that's what this one did. One of the best written I've ever seen. The characters didn't seem mechanical like they sometimes do, and there was plenty of emotional and believable reactions. I read the prequel as well, and it was just as good. I love the ending. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Nekay [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It is great!! Loved it a whole bunch!! The Ending and another round added to hte already exhausted Ritsuka is great!! Loved the Ending and want more!! I really want to see Soubi's reaction to that and what next!! I hope theres more after this it was great from the continutation!! I also think Ritsuka still hasn't figured it out!! Such a cute Uke!!! Please write another! I loved it!!
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Title: Great seqel!
Reviewed By: akeleven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyed it muchly!
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Reviewed By: Nazomi On: October 02, 2005 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Wonderful and well written. Way to go! ^.^ My favorite part was the ending. Teehee... 'Loveless' indeed...
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Reviewed By: oorin On: September 06, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been searching for fics where Soubi makes Ritsuka's 'ears fall off' for a while now. I must say i was more than glad to get to this one. It's wonderful! Though I WAS hoping to see everyone's reaction to Ritsuka. Whenever I do find a fic like this, nobody ever includes the reaction!
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Reviewed By: Yayness On: September 03, 2005 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I so loved this story! I couldn't find a single thing to dock points from. It was really that awesome. I loved the ending. Excellent. I loved the first story, too, but you didn't write that. X3 But this was such a great sequel! Love it! I was actually imagining Soubi to go so far as to cross out "Beloved" and cut in "Loveless" into his own thigh as a sort of name-change (Man, he would have to be desperate XP), but this was just as nice, because it seemed as though they were destined after all. Awww, how sweet. :3 Everyone lives happily ever after. Except Shinonome-sensei...and Ritsuka's creepy counselor lady. But they don't count. Maybe they'll go and have Hitomi's ears removed. NYARK. ...I'll just stop now. XD Great fic!
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