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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 06, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know, maybe I should have just continued to read because...wow...*speechless* I should probably get to bed now though, since school *mumbles a few choice curses* is starting up again tomorrow. Perfect, first I get sick, and now that I'm healthy, I have to go to school. Damn it! Well, anyway, I absolutely loved the chapter, as well as what was in the chapter. Update soon, rei
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Reviewed By: Tesmoname On: September 06, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another superb addition to your works! I always find your writting to be of the utmost quality, always enjoyable to read. I am definitely intrigued at your beginning, it was something different, yet left nothing unanswered. Well, like I said, it was a very enjoyable read-and I can hardely wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 06, 2005 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! New story! I simply just can't wait to see what happens next (which is silly to say because the next chapter is RIGHT THERE but I wanted to review first). Tee Hee. -rei
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 23:03 CDT
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Beautiful!!!! Although I am also curious as to what Sango is thinking about. Shippo too. I mean Im not sure what the three of their relationship is, but usually Kag/Sango are like sisters & Kag is like a mom to Shippo. Or at least thats how I think of it. But awesome! Cant wait to see how Yokos plan will work out. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Rabid(not logged in) On: September 06, 2005 22:16 CDT
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^-^ I swear you saw the rough draft to my next chapter. ...and now I'm tempted to disappoint all my non-existent readers and change the pairing... *youkomiroku*... :D Anyways. New story, Inu-angst! Sango-angst! and of course, HieiKagome. ^-^ Needless to say, I'm very curious where this is going, specially Youko's plan... It's interesting how you've been basically using first-person p.o.v's for the majority of the story, are you going to keep doing that? Or are you going to change to a third person pov later? ...^-^ Inuyasha's reaction is perfect, so is Miroku's. He would watch over Kagome... *big grin* No perverted intentions implied there. I wonder though, what's Shippou's thoughts on what's happening? You've covered Inuyasha, Hiei, Kagome, Miroku, and Youko... but I don't believe you've said what Sango and Shippou are thinking. Sango seems to have been absent from their campsite... killing trees? You did say she went at every chance she got. Hmmm... I'll stop my musing now, and eagerly await the next chapter. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Avari Shadowborn On: September 06, 2005 17:51 CDT
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I almost didn't read this since I don't really like Kagome. Ok, I hate her with a fiery passion. But Youko/Miroku? Who could pass that up? Update soon! Want more Youko!
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Reviewed By: Sury On: September 06, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Please contiue soon!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:07 CDT
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YAY!! ANOTHER AWESOME STORY BY MY FAVE AUTHOR!!! Cant wait till Kag wakes up :D:D:D:D
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Title: Consumed By Dark Flames
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 14:59 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Erin O'Riley On: September 06, 2005 14:51 CDT
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This is so awsome! I love this story, I hope you'll update soon. I love all your stories ^_^
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Reviewed By: lraine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 14:11 CDT
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What a great story! Love the first chapter, and cant wait for the next. It had a great feel to it, almost dark and dangerous. Keep up the great work
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