| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2002 02:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so loving this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 01, 2002 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! What I would give to spend a week with Vegeta!! This little jewel is moving along quite nicely and I'll be waiting for your next update. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2002 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I went back and reread my first review and saw all the spelling errors. Sorry about that, but that just shows you how late I was for work. Anyway I read the last two chapters and I must say that this story is a real gem. I like how you are building a relationship between V/B instead of having them just jump right in bed together like in some fics. I can't wait for your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story ie soooo good that I'm making myself late to work ro read it. I haven't read the last two chapters yet but I will as soon as get home. Good job.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 25, 2002 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so Raditz does care about Bulma after all, and I thought it was all lust. Zarbon, on the other hand, is a total asshole and I hope that soon you will take care of that little problem (hint, hint)^.^. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 21:02 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm soooo hooked on this fic! I love it!!! |
Reviewed By: Numina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 09:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's cool, very original, tho i see some grammar faults in it....not that it matters :) well keep up the good work i guess |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and well written. I can feel the tension building up, and hope that somehow Bulma can help Veggie whip Freeza's ass. |
Reviewed By: mic On: January 20, 2002 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Keep those chapters comming! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 20, 2002 04:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. At least now Raditz can warn Vegita about the green scum. Please update asap. |
Reviewed By: pub6 On: January 17, 2002 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats to say its great! |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: January 17, 2002 16:28 EST
Comment/Review:
great! keep going! i love to read more of your story! vegeta hides his feelings very well in this fic! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 17, 2002 08:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappies. Great fic. Keep goin'. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 16, 2002 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very captivating. Nice job. Can't wait to see how B&V's relationship start to blosem. Keep them chapters coming I'm on the edge of my seat here. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 09:39 EST
Comment/Review:
This is really good. I've never seen anyone go in this direction with a v/b fic. |
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