| "Smokes and Mirrors" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sayoko x3 [offline] On: November 28, 2005 16:33 CST
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HAHA! "You were that dumb clown that didn't know how to tell jokes for shit." i was laughing and my mom yells from the bottom of the stairs, 'What the hell are you laughing aboutt, you mental child?" which caused me to laugh even harderr.. and soo i was on a laughing highh for about 5 mins. Hehee ^__^' ,By the way that update was great!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 15:58 CST
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hey it's ok i wont be on for awhile kay? (grounded) hope to see more and hope that inu and kag hook up sometime soon! byez!
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Reviewed By: InuYasha_luver On: November 26, 2005 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are a grate writter and i have enjoyed this story. you created a grate story and i love it!! plz update soon and your doing a grate job!! o and i luv kagome, its so awsome when people make her in to a bad-ass!!
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Reviewed By: Sayoko x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read your story and it's awesome and i love it! Can't wait for you to updatee it! ( ^__^ )
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Reviewed By: psycho*off line* On: November 25, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I haven't read a story like this that actually wraps everything up quite as well as this was seams to . Good job and please keep the story going
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 16:38 CST
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Well, i do happen to think this is a fantastic story, despite not leaving reviews. Personally, I only like to leave em if I have something to say (good story doesn't seem that to me), but I do definitely see your point. I defintely wrote faster when i had more reviews. So welp, I guess here ya go! ^_^ fantastic, i do enjoy the darkness of it and that you didn't throw everybody into emotional bonding the first instant we see them on the screen. actually taking time to develop a relationship? gasp! how novel... hope you do continue soon.
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Title: Gomen! Gomen!
Reviewed By: Neka-chan On: November 25, 2005 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very sorry I never reviewed. I love your story, it's very original. I'll try to review more often. Gomen.
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Title: Your Fanfiction
Reviewed By: sleepercat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic work! I just finished reading it and am quite pleased with the way your story is turning out. I agree that reviews are important and am sorry that I was not able to follow your story from an earlier point. I am not sure I can give you any of the constructive criticism that you were hoping for since you seem to have a very good grasp on what you are doing. Your use of character development is superb and I enjoy your style of switching viewpoints and following individual people. I think that this story has great potential, as do you. It might be beneficial to introduce whose point of view you are taking during a given segment. Otherwise I think your story is phenomenal and will be happy to offer any help in the brainstorming, writing and editing of your story. I will also continue to write reviews for you upcoming chapters. Sincerely, sleepercat
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Reviewed By: anime_fan120(not logged in) On: November 25, 2005 11:38 CST
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The story is going really well...I normally review when the story is completely over but you want reviews so... its really good so far and i agree with miaa_hiaa that it would be really cool with the hospital scene!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 11:06 CST
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omfg XD even if you don't expect it from me i'm still gonna review...cept for thoese times when my comp is messed up...hey you wanna know something? you can do the next chappie in the hospital and inu comes to visit wouldn't that be funny? XD just a suggestion...
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Reviewed By: Hanyoukagome962 (nsi) On: November 25, 2005 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey im sorry for not reviewing i normally dont because i like to review stories when there done but I will review as much as i can to show i support and really love this fic if it will make you happy so I LOVE THIS FIC AND UPDATE SOON.
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Title: Smokes and Mirrors
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I have never reviewed! It is a fabonderectness (that means REALLY REALLY GOOD! ) FAN FIC! I didn't mean to uninspire you! ^^ I just loved your fanfic so much I can't find the word to explain it especially when I'm a slow typer so that....... enough excusses! It's a great fic and you are a wonderful author if people don't review they might think that... don't know or maybe they are just being a pussy and not reviewing (including me! I'm sorry! I was being a bitch! )sorry people who don't like profanity! So........ sorry i haven't reveiwed and it's a really fantastic story and no matter what other people say, if you enjoy it, if you like it, don't let anyone stop you! ^-^ Please update not everybody reviews but alot of people still want to read your story! And people will review, they are right now aren't they? Trust them! and if they still don't review... tell them to @.@ Magnificent fic, perfect author... Please update!
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Reviewed By: x_paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah! I'm sorry for not reviewing your fanfic! I read alot of fanfics, and it gets kinda confusing sometimes o_o I have lots of windows up, and I never remember if I reviewd and which ones I reviewed :[ But I hope that you put up a chappie soon, and that you get a bazillion reviews! :D
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 13:39 CST
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*gets hugged* omg XD i was the only shout out XD how funny! anyway's!!! i luved this chappie...the gore was weird and i'm a bit counfused on what tai is talking about but hey i'll figure it out! luffs to you!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 17:14 CST
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*grumbles and slowly puts tamatos in basket* this chappie was good and i love that song XP so yeah yay! *huggles*
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