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| "Magic of Tennis" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: priscilla On: September 25, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv the fanfic!please update soon,I want ot read more.It's very hilarious too.You're story is so amazing, I got hooked on it as soon as I read it!Continue please.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 17:05 CDT
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Thanks for the Ohtori/Shishido touches. I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't mind long chapters, in fact, I love them!!! Another brilliant chapter!!! Hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 10:31 CDT
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I really enjoyed the first chapter, especially that it was largely from owlpoint. I liked the idea that all these "genius" tennis players were actually wizards (I thought they were demons myself. Maybe it is a mix) and that they're loving parents weren't about to send them half way round the world to mysterious perverts. Maybe because I was reading while half asleep, I didn't like the second chapter nearly as well. Again, this may be because I was sleepy, but it seemed way too long for what actually goes on. Part of the problem, for me, is the number of characters. I have read some of the manga but I mostly know the series from the anime. Unfortunately, both these mediums have an advantage over the straight written word; you see the character and go, "Oh yeah, that guy." I don't have a problem with the Seigaku team, or Tachibana and his posse, and Kabaji and his boss (whose name I've already forgotten) but the less frequently the character recurs the more likely I am to have forgotten him. Instead of giving each school its moment in the sun in every chapter, it would be easier to follow, for dolts like me, if non-Seigaku guys were just mentioned in passing and then my memory was refreshed when they became germane. (Sorry for the lack of paragraphing.)
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He, he, forgot to rate the first chapter. I love the pairings you've chosen, they're all my favourites, but could I make a tiny request, maybe put in a smidgen of Ohtori/Shishido. Please? Pretty please? Oooh, Kaidou and Cat = Cute!!! Also love the way Kamio is jealous of Momo. Once again, I love the Yuuta and Fuji interaction. Too cute!!! Also love the way poor Mizuki can never get the better of Fuji, but judging from your pairings, guess he will win in the end by stealing Yuuta away. Once again, please, pretty please Ohtori/Shishido? Even a smidgen?
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 01:04 CDT
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I'm a major Harry Potter fan, but I have to say, your fic is better than the original! You might say I'm going overboard, but I really, really do mean it! It's fantastic, brilliant and I haven't been so enthralled with a Harry Potter fic/book for so long! I especially loved how you mutilated all of the poor owls, but my absolute, favourite, favourite part of your fic was reading about how overly protective Fuji is of Yuuta. I always love fics where he's protective. Too cute. I only have one question, and that is, what are the pairings for this fic. I hope that the tennis boys will pair up, I'm not sure I can see any of them with the Harry Potter people. Anyway, love this fic!
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