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| "Magic of Tennis" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: ladygizarme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 04:43 CDT
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oh yeah (my brain won't let me sleep til i get this off my mind) was wondering if/when/how anyone/everyone will find out *who* harry is? and if the creevey bros could give the POT boys' fangirls a run for their money XP (are both creevey bros in it by the third book? i forget right now..) and i can't help but keep imagining some confrontation between draco and akutsu concerning taichi's familiarity w/him XP
| Title: chapters 5, 6, 7
Reviewed By: ladygizarme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO i have 3 chapters to catch up on and that is awesome, so here i go with reviewing them... chapter 5: the sorting was very interesting to read from the POT guys' perspectives, i giggled madly at the sorting hat laughing at Inui :p and oooh, wonder what exactly Atobe's planning with making sure someone's in each house... *quirks brow* as if Yukimura wasn't entertaining enough before, i foresee some freaky-smart-scariness from him now that he's the only captain in Ravenclaw lol.. *continues to ch. 6* (ah, just typing remarks as i read now.. makes it easier..) lmao! comparing Dumbledore to Yukimura and Fuji--love it! lol the discussion of jackal's imperative head shaving :p yay! mini echizen-glomp by eiji! ahh i love those, def can't have too many XD lmao Kamio's reaction to "girls are more trustworthy than boys" ahhhh yesssss and a shinji-rant!! *love* lol and ending the chapter with karmic retribution in form of bloody-baron-stares XD *on to chap 7* shinji and luna connecting is cool, they both definitely have that sorta dazed-moony-off-in-their-own-world- but-subtley-deep eccentricity thing goin on ... if that makes sense.. ah hell i don't even know what i just said lol it's almost 5am and i shoulda gone to bed 2 hours ago at least.. lmao! the whole momo/fred/george/shinji scene! and then tachibana and shinji ahhhh i LOVE shinji-rants as much as eiji-on-ochibi-glomps!! ooooh hufflepuff's gonna ostracize yuuta, ootori and taichi??!! awww but they NEED their slytherins! (well ootori and taichi do at least lol ^_~) nyaaa poor jirou! i wanna cry with him!! he'd SO be devastated injuring Marui!! and loved the playing with hufflepuff house ya did; when there's room for it, why not?? i can imagine them being that way too.. can't wait to see ravenclaw and slytherin and some magic and tennis!! now off to bed i go!! for.. a couple hours.. 'til next time! ~ lg
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 02:44 CDT
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Mess with Yuuta and... *cackles manically*. Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 13:17 CDT
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great story! how much trouble do the teams cause in Hogwarts? do students see them practicing? what happens in hte different common rooms? plz update more soon!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:04 CDT
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can't wait =) so glad this is continuing =) the combination of the two worlds the way you pull me into the story I love it =)
| Reviewed By: Cousin D [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a big fan of this fic and I was delighted to see you updated. I was beginning to be afraid that you'd abandoned it. It's absolutely fantastic! You manage to keep me laughing all the way though whether it's the poor, abused owls or Inui the mad scientist. It'll be fun to see how Inui and Professor Snape get along. I rather think Professor Snape might like having someone in his class intelligent enough to experiemnt and invent on his own. Then again, I've always liked Professor Snape and Inui is one of my favorites. Maybe I'm just bias. I think what I like best about your story is the interaction between the characters. The dialoge is fantastic. I love the image of Tezuka confronting Dumbledore and telling him to leave his team alone. Now that the teams are all split up, it'll be fun seeing how the rest of Hogwarts takes to them still being friends and working together. I have an image in my mind of a scene. I can see a Quittich match going on and the teams having no interest in it. Instead, while everyone searching for the snitch, I can believe that it would find its way to the tennis players as they're practicing and then they use it like a tennis ball. With their fast moves, I should think they'd easily be able to do it. Best of luck with the rest of your story. I hope you keep it up till the end. best regards, Cousin D
| Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 16:04 CDT
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not a huge fan fiction reader specially of ongoing stories but had to try this one out since the summary didn't sound like it would spoil anything in either of the two stories. And it is great haven't enjoyed a story as much in quite some time. I could just see the scenes playing though my head as I was reading. Cannot wait until you up date this again.
| Title: ^____________^
Reviewed By: ladygizarme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nyahaa, well this is quite different, i must say! lol, i happened to find it by chance, as i rarely read on MM anymore, but AFF was down and i was bored.. anyway, so i see this summary and immediately go "Pot/HP?? wtf??" but... i'm a curious kittie and can't help but look at things that make me think that heehee.. so i open it up and start reading.. and i'm immediately hooked!! despite the unlikeliness of the crossover, you seem to have thought and planned it out quite well.. on top of that, your writing style is very smooth, flows well, is easy and entertaining to read.. i love how you write the characters, you have them DOWN, even to the interactions between players from different schools, it's perfect!! i found myself cracking up almost the whole way through with mad giggles, and actually able to picture this happening in the anime! lol.. i don't think the chapters are too long at all! in fact i wouldn't mind if they were longer lol, i love long chapters.. but also, putting chapters out in good time is good too, but not above quality of the chapter... right now, my big question is: why wasn't ryoma included with those that got wands?? i think he deserves the tensai status as well.. but maybe you have other plans for him? hmm.. well, other than that, this is excellent, and i'm really happy you're focusing on all these characters, as they are most of my favorites--i'm especially happy yukimura, shinji and taichi are there!! oh yeah, current favorite scene: the whole bus ride, especially the pile up 'mishaps' and ensuing actions/comments that made lupin uncomfortable *giggles giddily* i really hope you have more for this soon!! i'm so faving this story!! oh, and btw, i think i reviewed a couple of your amvs on the org, but don't remember for sure or which ones, but i have: brothers, the golden pair, the game is tennis, you're the one (just of your pot amvs.. do you have others for other anime? i may have some of those too if you do :p), my favs are the golden pair and you're the one ^___^ anyway, you rock, this is awesome, write more onegai!!! ~ lg
| Reviewed By: InuYoukaiGal1450 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. AWESOME fic. I can't wait till you update next! AWESOME!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my lord, so exciting! I thought you weren't going to continue this fic, imagine my surprise and delight when I saw an update! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: priscilla On: September 25, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv the fanfic!please update soon,I want ot read more.It's very hilarious too.You're story is so amazing, I got hooked on it as soon as I read it!Continue please.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 17:05 CDT
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Thanks for the Ohtori/Shishido touches. I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't mind long chapters, in fact, I love them!!! Another brilliant chapter!!! Hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 10:31 CDT
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I really enjoyed the first chapter, especially that it was largely from owlpoint. I liked the idea that all these "genius" tennis players were actually wizards (I thought they were demons myself. Maybe it is a mix) and that they're loving parents weren't about to send them half way round the world to mysterious perverts. Maybe because I was reading while half asleep, I didn't like the second chapter nearly as well. Again, this may be because I was sleepy, but it seemed way too long for what actually goes on. Part of the problem, for me, is the number of characters. I have read some of the manga but I mostly know the series from the anime. Unfortunately, both these mediums have an advantage over the straight written word; you see the character and go, "Oh yeah, that guy." I don't have a problem with the Seigaku team, or Tachibana and his posse, and Kabaji and his boss (whose name I've already forgotten) but the less frequently the character recurs the more likely I am to have forgotten him. Instead of giving each school its moment in the sun in every chapter, it would be easier to follow, for dolts like me, if non-Seigaku guys were just mentioned in passing and then my memory was refreshed when they became germane. (Sorry for the lack of paragraphing.)
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He, he, forgot to rate the first chapter. I love the pairings you've chosen, they're all my favourites, but could I make a tiny request, maybe put in a smidgen of Ohtori/Shishido. Please? Pretty please? Oooh, Kaidou and Cat = Cute!!! Also love the way Kamio is jealous of Momo. Once again, I love the Yuuta and Fuji interaction. Too cute!!! Also love the way poor Mizuki can never get the better of Fuji, but judging from your pairings, guess he will win in the end by stealing Yuuta away. Once again, please, pretty please Ohtori/Shishido? Even a smidgen?
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 01:04 CDT
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I'm a major Harry Potter fan, but I have to say, your fic is better than the original! You might say I'm going overboard, but I really, really do mean it! It's fantastic, brilliant and I haven't been so enthralled with a Harry Potter fic/book for so long! I especially loved how you mutilated all of the poor owls, but my absolute, favourite, favourite part of your fic was reading about how overly protective Fuji is of Yuuta. I always love fics where he's protective. Too cute. I only have one question, and that is, what are the pairings for this fic. I hope that the tennis boys will pair up, I'm not sure I can see any of them with the Harry Potter people. Anyway, love this fic!
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