| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: August 27, 2006 15:47 EDT
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Celacent?? Ohh...thas gota be someting uber cool!! cant wait to find out! keep writing Luve yas!
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Title: chimaera009
Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 03:51 EDT
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please update please update!! been waiting so long for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: AoiUshi On: August 10, 2006 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy this fic and hope that you update soon. I mean, I've read some many GW fics that I was giving up because in some way or another, they were all the same, or just plots that were used over and over again. However, this was very different and I thank you very much for writing it!! I also love Wufei in this fic. He is an adorable 'babysitter' XD (I'm a MM.org member, I just wasn't really signed in....oops) - Aoi_Ushi
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 01:38 EDT
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I really glad that you didn't change Duo and Heero's relationship too much. Although at time fustrating, I really like how you'reslowly and deligently developing their relationship. I really can't wait to see Duo learn more magic, somthing tells me he has an innate ability to manifest magic. Hummmm.
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Title: Magnificent!!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, this is one of the most well-written pieces of fanfiction I have read so far, and trust me, I've read and reviewed tons of fics. Your style of writing is thorough, exciting, and enjoyable. We learn new info every chapter just as Duo learns it, which is a refreshing change. Your ideas concerning magic and the celestials, as well as the greek gods are all executed flawlessly. I like the story very much and hope you continue it! ^^ As for the pairings, they are wonderful! I love HeeroxDuo the most though! ;) TrowaxQuatre are good too, but Heero and Duo are just perfect and wonderful. I loved how you just revealed in the latest chapter that Heero is basically a slave to the Emperor as well. Oh gawd, I hope that the Emperor doesn't choose Heero on the night of his coronation! :( Not only would it hurt Heero and Duo both immensely, the fact that Heero would be forced to let the Emperor have his way...*shudders*. One more very important factor that I have to compliment you on is your chapter length, seeing as it's perfect! It's not too long, in case people are saying that. It's perfect, any shorter would be disappointing considering how wonderfully you write. Most of the time I find the other writer's fics have chapters that are WAY too short or inconsistent and lack depth. You keep yours at roughly the same length and use such detail and description that the length turns out perfect making it a wonderful read. Obviously you can tell that I've enjoyed your story so far and I hope to read more asap!
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Reviewed By: Dream 2 dream On: July 24, 2006 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I have seen this story before, I just had never thought to read it. I'm damn glad I decided to read it now. This was amazing! I hope you update again, soon. I really want to know what happens next! ^_~
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 14:30 EDT
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great chapter! glad to see your back and writing! hope it wont take as long as it did the first time! haha! Por Duo, his hear and mind cant agree and what the hell with Heero not leaving the city? man i i were there i'd show the emperor what for! awesome job keep it up X3
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Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!! I was waiting for you to post this complete version and I must admit that it was worth it. Thanks you!! *huggles* I really enjoyed it, though, I was a bit disappointed that there was lil' action here, as I'm used to in your story. I really hope to read the next chapter soon and I really wish that duo could step on his pride and comfort poor Hee-bear. BTW, poor Wuffles!!! Though, serves him right to come in the room without knocking first. *grins* And to answer your question, personally speaking, it would be definitely alright for me to see gore and the stuff in the story and I hope that 1x2 lemon would be somewhere nearby too. Or maybe just some comforting after really disturbing scenes. *nods* Anyways, don't stay away too long and come back with the continuation. Huggles, Anya
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Title: Rey de Guerra (or something)
Reviewed By: Kalico(too lazy for my own good) On: July 23, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. you really made my day with this update. in fact i was totally fuming when my com wouldn't connect to the internet and then i was in a rage when i couldn't access my mailbox and find the hyperlink to the new chap but i soon ca;med down when i remembered that i could just go to the site and look for the story since it would be recent. genius aren't i/ lol...anyway i totally enjoyed this fic really hope you continue with it. gore is no issue, sex is no issue and all other profanities don't faze me.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (not signed in) On: July 23, 2006 12:19 EDT
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Bring on the gore! And the smut- musn't forget the smut. Yay for bigger chapters! *Sigh* Duo and Heero fluffiness *Happy Faint*
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 10:56 EDT
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You truly are too cruel...haha sorry to hear about your troubles, I know how it is. Wonderful chapter, I was wondering how Duo was going to react the next day, it would have been odd if he just brushed it off. Awesome job hope to see more sooner than last time!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 18, 2006 17:44 EDT
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yay! an update! cant wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: Trio Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 10:17 EDT
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...teaser or not, this was good. No... not good... more like "OH MY KAMI" amazing. :D I hope Quatre can get to Duo soon... o_o EKK! CAN'T HAVE DUO DYING! NOOOOOO! ^^;; sorry. no sleep. I'm looking forward for the next...half...of the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi) On: July 18, 2006 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Argh! I could strangle you right now! Why did you do that!? C'mon and update soon! Like tomorrow would be desirable...or tonight? Soon! I want to know wether Duo dies or not, or if Quatre gets there to talk to him in time. Also want to know if Solo is one of the bodies in the graves after the massacre. So very good and we all have to wait so long!
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Title: don't stop writing!
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: July 15, 2006 09:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey, u have not been updating for veri longtime ya know? as a fan of lord of war, i beseech you to at least respond, are u having a writer's block, no time, no interest or what? please don't leave mi hanging there begging for more!
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