| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: March 17, 2006 19:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I love how things are moving along.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_innocence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am quite enjoying this fic so far and would appreciate updates soon and frequently ^_^ Please and thanks. Plus, if Heero gives Duo to that pervy guy at the end of that last chapter, I'll track you down and kill you *Shakes fist threateningly* ...Sorry, I haven't taken my pills tonight. *sweatdrop* Okay just write more please.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is another great chapter, although the cliff hanger left me mad...you better not hurt Duo or ELSE. Anyways thanks for the info on a beta, and I would love to be a beta, although I do suck at giving suggestions. Although you can't tell, I am really great with spelling and grammar. Keep updating. Oh if you need some encoruagement or anything you can email me at adulum06@yahoo.com. :)
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Reviewed By: redk (not logged in) On: March 13, 2006 11:05 EST
Comment/Review:
You might want to consider getting a beta to help you in a few areas of your story. This is an historical setting, correct? Some of your wording seems odd and out of place. I don't think your characters would be tossing around the word "newbie." With some tweaking your story could be a lot better.
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Reviewed By: Asmodeus Saccharine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Athena and the Elysian Fields, correct?
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg thats like..............like.........i don't even know what thats like. wow, he so has to be joking, heero would never do that. would he???? i can't wait for more, this story is awsome!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli too lazy to sign in On: March 09, 2006 22:23 EST
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I'm gunna guess here, but: Athena and Elysian fields? Anyway, nifty ass story, continue!! Yay ^_^
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Title: MORE PLEASE MORE!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 09, 2006 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! NO! You must write more! Please I'm beggin here, that is a completely unfair cliffy-like thing and then you took so long to update to begin with and you write so blastedly well. please update soon or I'll go...more...crazy.
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 15:07 EST
Comment/Review:
you have a very cruel mind to leave it like that....I pray that you update alot sooner! My sanity is at stake!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 09, 2006 07:14 EST
Comment/Review:
cool! i love this fic and was waiting for an update! the long chapter definitely made up for the long wait, but now you put me in a sad disposition because it's such a cliffhanger! i really liked the interaction duo and heero are having as they are slowly getting to know each other, as well as the descriptive scenes of the banguet! i can't wait for the next chapter so update again soon!
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Title: Noooo
Reviewed By: unicorn1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 21:05 EST
Comment/Review:
You cannot leave it there :( please I love this sotry. I cannot wait to find out what happens. Plase update soon. ^_^
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Title: AHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter, but man ending it there ;_;. Update SOON!
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Reviewed By: Codan On: March 08, 2006 14:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cannot possibly leave it there! You're not just mean you are PURE EVIL!!!!!!!!! Great Chapter, Heero is so sweet to sally ^^
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Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 14:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it but if you make Duo sleep with that……….trash, I'm sooooo going to haunt you in your dreams!!! ^o^ Beware!!! I'm really scary. XD Hugs, Anya
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Title: Wonderful like always
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 12:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the twist at the end but I truly hope that Duo finds a way to escape this man. I just love the attraction growing between Duo and Heero. I'm counting the chapters until they snap and make love or something. I truly adore this story, can't wait to read more.
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