| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 01:03 EDT
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I just love reading your updates, sadly I haven't any time to be your beta anymore but I love your updates and I love the story, I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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Title: when is the next chap?
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: October 26, 2006 21:55 EDT
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pls don't toture us animore!!! pls at least do tell us when the next chap is coming out!!! it has been more den a month,...
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: ShinixTsu On: October 25, 2006 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooow.... Heero, a celacent... thats a shock really... hey would Heero be the emperor's aiko at the coronation??? because the way you write about the emperor and heero, well, it's like that they are hidding something... pls no!!! it's disgusting!!! but you could add that, just a suggestion, like duo thinking Heero would be the emperor's aiko for the coronation, i think it wuold be a good fuss on readers... oh wait... sorry... i really like the way you write the fic, it's based on actual facts and not all fanfic writers bother about that, that's great!! and i'm still waiting for more gore but it seems that you're still beginning to write it... oh pls don't be the kind of writer that would write horribly long and somtimes senseless opening and would have a short unsatisfactory climax and end... oh.. btw.. pls let heero fuck duo!!! just for once!! pls.. pls.. pls.. pretty pls...
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Reviewed By: Misa1120 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH.MY.FUCKING.GOD!!!! I can't believe it! Heero is the Celacent? I thought something was fishy about the whole overprotective shit Primivitus pulled in one of the earlier chapters... but man! 'Lord of War' is the best fucking fanic I've ever read! You just gotta continue!
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Reviewed By: Yuikitai On: October 16, 2006 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic was amazing. For you to actually get me to read 12 chapters of a fanfic (and long ones at that) is a true accomplishment. I usually read maybe the first two chapters of a fan fic and get bored but no you did the impossible. I hope to read more so please continue for my sake as for the rest of your fans.
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Reviewed By: revolemina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 16:41 EDT
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Hi, i've been following this fic for some time and i can't help but notice it hasn't been updated for quite a while. I understand if you have something that's delaying progress, but please update soon, the cliffhanger is probably killing everyone already (including me O_o) It would be such a shame if this story was left unfinished.
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Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 09:27 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! Heero is a Celacent. What the fuck? Man foget that. This story was fuking amazing. I was in tears almost the entire of the last chapter.Fucking hell. God!! I want to read more. It's just soo interesting and I've been on an emotional rollercoaster. Please tell me you'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: Innchan On: October 07, 2006 18:10 EDT
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There is so much rubbish out there - and then one can stumble across a jewel like this story... Vau! I began to think Duo was Celacent, but then it is Heero. The hints you gave though, my bad for misinterpreting. Well, it's now 1 am so maybe I can be forgiven? Kanbatte, Innchan
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Reviewed By: tyleet88 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 18:04 EDT
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this is very very very good you have to keep this going you have got to update real soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Reviewed By: Shinashi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 23:58 EDT
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It didn't really come as a surprise but damn! I was soooooo looking forward to it!!! Reading nine chapters in two days is a lot of work and I'm so glad I stuck with this fic... Update soon!
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Title: love this
Reviewed By: kamiya On: September 26, 2006 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I freakin love this fic, the only sad thing is that it hasn't had chapters added onto it for quite some time. i really hope it gets updated soon. i'd hate to see a great story go to waste, because it has no endings, or anything. the writing, creativity, and characters are absolutly great.
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Title: Up to Chapter 12
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo, I loved this new chapter, so much happened! Heero was so cute trying to surprise Duo and getting so excited about doing something to make him happy. ^^ Too bad he didn't consider Duo's position and feelings too well. :( Now they'll have one more thing to smooth over next chapter. ;) OMG, Heero is a Celacent! He has all of the celestial gifts and will die if he uses them, right?! That's terrible!!! I feel bad for both Heero and Duo right now, especially for Duo since Heero's been hiding it from him and he found out in the worst way possible. Heero set him free but what awful timing on his part, lol. This story is just so well-written and entertaining that I truly hope you continue it for as long as possible and eventually finish it. ^^ You've set the plot up so well that there's just so many things that could happen and it leaves us guessing what'll happen next! Please, keep up the good work and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: DL On: September 14, 2006 02:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is realy good. I hope to readmore soon. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 16:34 EDT
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Oh wow that was an unforseen twist there. Yay way to thicken the plot (I personally thought it was Duo, being one Celescial gift). aww at first I was naviee and thought Heero was taking Duo to a carnaval, but then I read ring arena and animal torture warning...ancient Rome.....oooh boy. It is indeed surprising that Heero's character would enjoy the game, but understandable. Could you please explain what Celestial Gift and Celacent are in the next chapter, maybe a quick review. I remember you mentioning it, but that was awhile back and I can't seem to find the chapter. Outstanding job as always. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 01:56 EDT
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Oh my God!! How do you pronounce "Celacent" and what the hell does that mean? You can't just leave us with the big question mark! Or rather, you just did... *mumbles* This is so good, I liked the gore you put in here, although I was just as surprised as Duo with his comrade being killed in front of his eyes. You are a real good writer. Oh and the magic thing really seems to suit Duo really well. I hope he'll be able to master it soon! Great chapter and please update soon! I'm glad you didn't wait for your beta and if she takes long again, just post it!! See ya!
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