Reviewed By: Vulcana On: September 12, 2005 08:25 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You might want to check your formatting it all came out underlined. Other than that this was completely original and very enjoyable. I hope you write more soon. Sounds like Kagome will have to deal with courting where as before all she had to deal with was scaring people away.