| "Addicted Confessions" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 16:38 CDT
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omg....that was awful...poor Kohaku...gah...great job on this chapter...I think I might stop crying tomorrow...update soon...luvs Ty < 3
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 01:27 CDT
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i'm sad to see that this story has only three reviews. i'm hoping that as you progress, so will your readers. this story really is good, i can't wait for it to get started. it's a topic, that if handeled correctly, can really become a wonderful story and hopefully an insipration to those caught in the winds of similar situations to get help. wonderful! i can't wait to see what you do!! keep it up! your imagery at the beginning is right on key and so well written. i did notice a few grammar mistakes later on but nothing to be concerned with. if you ever need help or for someone just to be a second set of eyes for the story, don't hesitate to email me! ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Rami-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 17:29 CDT
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I have many friends who suffer from various drug/alcohol/substance additions. I hope, since you unfortunetly are more aware of the seriousness of this topic, you can bring about a story that will do justice. Too many authors make a joke of this--a tool to make Inuyasha seem like a jerk. I like your story so far and it was clever how you made Kouga Ayame's addiction...very true ^^
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Reviewed By: TwistedAddiction [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 17:20 CDT
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omg its good and theress so little but i love it! *runs to bottom of the page and clicks faves*
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 23:43 CDT
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you're absoultly right, addiction is not a joke at all. it's interesting to see someone being willing to tackle such a sensitive matter in a fanfiction. there are a lot of people out there who throw around the use of drugs or rape in their fics then have the person pop right back up in the next chapter, ironically cured of all aillments. i'm really looking forward to this fic. if you want another set of eyes to look over the story, email me.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:06 CDT
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sorry...didn't mean to make it sound like I was being inconsiderate...but that's what I do best...saying the wrong things when it's better left in your mind....I do understand how my review may have upset you some...I'll try to keep those kinds of things to myself...sorry...luvs Ty < 3
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 18:12 CDT
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i like it.... hopefully you write it with some meaning and not take the subject of drugs lightly.... hope you update from: I
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Title: First one...yay!!
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay...I thought that was just hilarious...Miroku...addicted to sex? that is just too funny...great job...and I'm not mad about you not updating your other stories...I know how it is..I've did it...twice...lol...well update soon...luvs Ty
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