| "Wherever You Will Go" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: KittyBlue
Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemme tell you one thing- the only reason this isn't getting a perfect ten is because it's not an 'epic' such as...Epic. lol. There is only three stories i enjoyed more and all three were epics, two unfinished but still good. I absolutely loved how you did this, usually I do NOT go for Future fics, because alot of them END with Vegeta dying. I was quite upset about trunks's death, though happy Bra was born. I was almost expecting a way for HIM to come back but oh well.
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Reviewed By: Vegeta-DarkPrince On: June 22, 2005 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. You captured Vegeta's and Trunk's characters very well. Keep writing fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 04:18 CDT
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that was a fantastic story... your stories can be quite addicting... great work
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoymet factor only got a nine because of the end. I laughed, I cried, It was really darn (yes, I know there are better words but I don't want to offend) good. I loved the way you portrayed the dark side of Trunks. That torture scene in the gravity room.....glad to know he had it in him.
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Reviewed By: bise b On: March 25, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome! congrats to the fantastic writer! that was so sad at the ending! i almost cried! you did an awsome job and dont let anyone tell you otherwise... |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 01:31 CDT
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oh wow, i love it, its absolutly fantastical, that was definately some good peice of B/V cant wait for you to update your other stories |
Reviewed By: Firaga (lazy to log in) On: May 27, 2002 02:29 CDT
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OH MY GOD!!!!!!! that was incredible!!! i loved it so much! you really have to continue posting up new fics, cause you're a really good writer! good job :)! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 12, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautiful!! oh wow, that was great. i just don't have the words to describe how incredibly awesome your story is! it truely did inspire awe in me regarding your ability in this story!!! well, needless to say, i loved it! a very powerful ending, i must say. fantastic. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: angeliz On: May 07, 2002 18:44 CDT
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cute fic, loved it, very very very creative and incredibly funny! u were brilliant, but u made my baby die (not TRUNKS!!!!) oh well, he's alive and living in MY heart, even if he isn't in UR fic, lol, jk, no hard feelings, luv! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wails of agony* Why my Trunks? Why? Why? Why? It's not fair!!! He was too young and beautiful!!! Why Kahlan? Just tell me why!
*sniffles* This was an awesome story (aside for the whole Trunks thing). You should be proud of it. You are such a wonderful writer (I just wish you'd quit killing off the Saiyan children. That's right, I haven't forgotten what you did to my Goten).
By the way, have you ever seen The Tenth Kingdom. The woman hunt reminds me of a chase scene in it. Might I add that that scene was quiet the turn on ^_~.
Well I guess I've flattered you enough so I should go update one of my million current fics. I'm going to drive myself crazy (or at least crazier than I already am).
Vegeta: I don't believe it's possible to be crazier than you already are.
JB: *sighs* Do you always have to have something smart to say?
Vegeta: Yes.
JB: I wasn't even talking to you. I was talking to Kahlan.
Vegeta: I don't care who you were talking to. I answered.
JB: *turns to the heavens* Dear God, make the visions stop. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 07, 2002 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sad ending!! This was brilliant and well written. You should be proud of yourself. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 07, 2002 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most incredible chapters of any B/V story that I have ever read. Every emotion was thrown in at random. I didn't know how I was gonna feel at any given time. Truly a masterpiece. Just one thing bothers me, why Trunks? |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed ur fic! I gave up reading V/B fics because of they all became the same. All of them (appart from yours) are set just before the androids arrive, or in an alternate universe which usually make no sense anyway! though yours wasn't like that at all.
I liked the idea of Vegeta being in hell and all, I vagely remeber some gliches in there, but all stories have them. The only critisim I have is that the whole story seemed slightly rushed. I'm guessing that you wrote it knowing what was going to happen and really wanted to get to that part, though I may be wrong.
Don't take any of this the wrong way. I've been reading Z/GT stories for well over 2 years, all types of stories as well. So I've read my fair share of V/B's, and yours is in the top five of V/B!
What I think I enjoyed the most was that I didn't know what was going to happen. Sure it had the usuall traits of a V/B and without those the story wouldn't be a V/B now would it? I'm still not sure about the ending. I mean, did trunks really die? or was it the clone? and either way, what happened to the other Trunks @_@ Still, why'd you go kill him off anyway!?!? meanie :P
Anyways I'm blabbering again. I can't wait untill you write another story (If you are that is)
By any chance have you read "From Bad to Worse" by Bart Hawkes? here's the URL:
http://www.angelfire.com/anime4/darkeside/home.htm
He also wrote a V/B, all though along the present timeline.
Zorella,
ssj_zorella@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again! Another great chapter. The cuddling and breakfast scenes had me roflmbo! I really enjoyed Trunks' memory loss at the end there. It was soooo...Vegeta-ish (I used one of your new words). Now all I have left is DOY (sheirks in excitement). Back to this story, I can't wait for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 03, 2002 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost flipped when you updated, and what an update!! Great chapter with every emotion thrown in. I love the verbal bull between B/V. I never get tired of hearing it. That Scalthus should be eliminated, followed by that lunatic Darren. I mean the guy talks to portraits for Kami's sake. I have a feeling that his plan is gonna go to hell real quick. I love it!! Write more when you can. Peace |
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