| "Hanyou of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kirara Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 16:46 CST
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Awesome story i'm really looking forward to it's update! u have a new loyal fan! :)
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: November 06, 2005 12:21 CST
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just to let u know yeah i agree most jobs are tiring (no i don't have a job but some of my friends and parents do) so if it'll take you a while to update then that's fine as long as you do update. It really is a good fanfic the only reason there being so pushy is because it's really good and it'd be a shame to stop writing. I hope this is the least bit helpful to you. oh and by the way wow you made Inuyasha a model. I wonder what Kagome will think? Just keep writing it's a good fic but write when you can. see ya! ^_^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: priestess kylie=chan (not logged in) On: November 02, 2005 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't send you an email but I will write a review and ask you to update as soon as humanly possible! This is awesome and I can't wait to see if Inuyasha actually goes through with the nude photo and how Kagome will react when she finally finds out about all of this and what he is going to do for her...and...and...oh nevermind I will let you continue the story! But I love it! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 02, 2005 04:01 CST
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First of all, absolutely fantastic chapter. Glad to see Souta getting involved in trying to help the two of them...I only hope that this 'job' doesn't backfire...somehow I don't think Kagome would be very happy if she found out... Second, I agree, work is a absolute pain in the rear. GOd, I wish I was back at University...either way, I hope you feel better soon and don't worry about the updates, post them when you can and ignore the selfish idiots who keep saying those things. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, it is cute. But I mostly reviewed to ask a question. I notice the friendly T (PG-13) rating on your fic here on mediaminer, versus the R rating and mention of lime in the summary on aff.net. Does that mean mediaminer will have the family-friendly version while aff gets the unedited one? I suppose the evidence makes it safe to assume so, but it's unusual. In my experience fanfiction.net usually has the clean version, while mediaminer and/or aff are used for unedited versions.
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Reviewed By: love it On: November 02, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good. i dont care how long it takes u, just update and make shur u finish the stort , but take your time . GOOD STORY
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Reviewed By: KOC On: November 02, 2005 00:18 CST
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I know you want to add sensuality in your fic, and there is nothing wrong with that. However, I find it EXTREMELY unlikely that Inuyasha would ever pose naked to anyone, much less to someone he just met. He was raised in Feudal Japan, where one did not even touch people you didn't know well. Anything sexual happened only in private and between to people, so he would not be at ease with this kind of proposition at all. On the contrary, he would see it as an equivalent for prostituting himself. I also think that Souta seems a tad OOC. Somehow his eagerness to catch his sister in a compromising situation is just a little bit weird to me. Also, I must confess that I think you could leave out most of the cloth descriptions. They don't really add anything to the plot, since the only thing we need to know is that Inuyasha was wearing modern clothes and looked good. Personally I always skip those parts where you walk about his clothes in detail. I like the way your fic is going, and you have an interesting subject to examine, but these were just some things that came to my mind when I read the last chapter. Please don't take this as a flame, since I think your fic is much better than many out there.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: October 30, 2005 09:20 CST
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ok a few things 1)awesome fic keep writing its awesome 2)if Hojo tries anything which id be ok with get Inuyasha to kick his a* and 3)OMG this is so friggin cute plzplzplzplzPLZ rite more ur an excellent riter!latz
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Reviewed By: Krikke-chan On: October 28, 2005 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is great! ^__^ Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story pease update sooon i can't wait 4 the next chapter
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Reviewed By: mellymoo On: October 21, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let the author know that this is a great story, a great concept, and stays wonderfully true to the characters. This is the most enjoyable fanfic I've read.
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Reviewed By: fatalfeline 2 lazy 2 log her ass in On: October 18, 2005 16:17 CDT
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wicked awesum! cant wait 4 the rest! vamos vamos! get writing!
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Reviewed By: chelsea123 On: October 17, 2005 22:02 CDT
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update soon good work
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Reviewed By: robinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 14:25 CDT
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...This is certainly awkward. I have a story very similar to this entitled, 'The Future' and it was posted on the site back in August...
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 04:35 CDT
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Excellent chapter. One question, how did they cover his ears this time? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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