| "Hanyou of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: love it On: November 02, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good. i dont care how long it takes u, just update and make shur u finish the stort , but take your time . GOOD STORY
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Reviewed By: KOC On: November 02, 2005 00:18 CST
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I know you want to add sensuality in your fic, and there is nothing wrong with that. However, I find it EXTREMELY unlikely that Inuyasha would ever pose naked to anyone, much less to someone he just met. He was raised in Feudal Japan, where one did not even touch people you didn't know well. Anything sexual happened only in private and between to people, so he would not be at ease with this kind of proposition at all. On the contrary, he would see it as an equivalent for prostituting himself. I also think that Souta seems a tad OOC. Somehow his eagerness to catch his sister in a compromising situation is just a little bit weird to me. Also, I must confess that I think you could leave out most of the cloth descriptions. They don't really add anything to the plot, since the only thing we need to know is that Inuyasha was wearing modern clothes and looked good. Personally I always skip those parts where you walk about his clothes in detail. I like the way your fic is going, and you have an interesting subject to examine, but these were just some things that came to my mind when I read the last chapter. Please don't take this as a flame, since I think your fic is much better than many out there.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: October 30, 2005 09:20 CST
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ok a few things 1)awesome fic keep writing its awesome 2)if Hojo tries anything which id be ok with get Inuyasha to kick his a* and 3)OMG this is so friggin cute plzplzplzplzPLZ rite more ur an excellent riter!latz
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Reviewed By: Krikke-chan On: October 28, 2005 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is great! ^__^ Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story pease update sooon i can't wait 4 the next chapter
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Reviewed By: mellymoo On: October 21, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let the author know that this is a great story, a great concept, and stays wonderfully true to the characters. This is the most enjoyable fanfic I've read.
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Reviewed By: fatalfeline 2 lazy 2 log her ass in On: October 18, 2005 16:17 CDT
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wicked awesum! cant wait 4 the rest! vamos vamos! get writing!
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Reviewed By: chelsea123 On: October 17, 2005 22:02 CDT
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update soon good work
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Reviewed By: robinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 14:25 CDT
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...This is certainly awkward. I have a story very similar to this entitled, 'The Future' and it was posted on the site back in August...
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 04:35 CDT
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Excellent chapter. One question, how did they cover his ears this time? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: just_a_friend [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally i have been able to start reading a story with only the 1st up and want to read more. i like the story so far.keep goin'.
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this! I really like the premise and what you have so fare! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Shaku On: September 27, 2005 22:02 CDT
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I'm a big fan of yours so far! ^0^! Maybe you should make this a limey-lemony fun hentai... but you're the author, so I'm not gonna argue. So far cute! Keep up the coolness workings
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 26, 2005 18:48 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I like how you started this, look forwards to seeing what happens next. Good lcuk & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: good job so far
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I am really enjoying it thus far! Please update! I only gave you an 8 because there's only one chapter up so far and I can't exactly give an overall rating just yet...but other than that I love it! Please keep writing! I added it to my favs!
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