| "Hanyou of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: fatalfeline 2 lazy 2 log her ass in On: October 18, 2005 16:17 CDT
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wicked awesum! cant wait 4 the rest! vamos vamos! get writing!
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Reviewed By: chelsea123 On: October 17, 2005 22:02 CDT
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update soon good work
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Reviewed By: robinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 14:25 CDT
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...This is certainly awkward. I have a story very similar to this entitled, 'The Future' and it was posted on the site back in August...
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 04:35 CDT
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Excellent chapter. One question, how did they cover his ears this time? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: just_a_friend [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally i have been able to start reading a story with only the 1st up and want to read more. i like the story so far.keep goin'.
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this! I really like the premise and what you have so fare! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Shaku On: September 27, 2005 22:02 CDT
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I'm a big fan of yours so far! ^0^! Maybe you should make this a limey-lemony fun hentai... but you're the author, so I'm not gonna argue. So far cute! Keep up the coolness workings
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 26, 2005 18:48 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I like how you started this, look forwards to seeing what happens next. Good lcuk & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: good job so far
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I am really enjoying it thus far! Please update! I only gave you an 8 because there's only one chapter up so far and I can't exactly give an overall rating just yet...but other than that I love it! Please keep writing! I added it to my favs!
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: September 26, 2005 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Should be fun. Let's see where you have them go.
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