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Title: kudos
Reviewed By: InuLuv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos to you =) Some fics that contain "disable" themes dont come out to well. I really enjoy the inu kag feelings in the story. Cant wait to read more. I am a new fanfic writer can you give me any tips on how to start a story? InuLuv forever/ Jstanz
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 21:44 CST
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FIIIIINNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! That took forever didn't it? God,I can't wait for the next update! Thank your beta for me,LATER!
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: November 02, 2006 19:28 CST
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ahh this has to be like a top 3 chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 16:08 CST
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Ha! Love it. The whole story is hilarious. Took me about a total of three hours to read the whole thing, but I preservered and did it. Just got one thing to say to you....and I forgot it. Well anyways, awesome idea, awesome story, awesome little voice in InuYasha's head. ^.~
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man i miss alot! SO SORRY!! but man this last one was funny, their so cute and sota!!! oh and thanks i was waiting for her to open up some too. update soon and i hope your bata feels better.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you update quick, now if only all the authors can do that.... Well I wasn't expecting that them arguing and then endup as boyfriend and girlfriend, nice. So update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 21:44 CST
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The reviews always look so much bigger when I'm writing them in the little boxy thing... Didn't really like the flashback with Kagome and her father. Two reasons for that; I hate flashbacks (especially when they aren't terribly important to the plot), and it seemed a little over the top melodramatic-wannabe angst. Not much mind you, but you were wandering into country song/retarded pile as much shit on the characters as you can territory there. Both Inuyasha and Kagome have strange aversions to things based on things their parents used to do, (Inuyasha and his doors, Kagome and her completed phone coversations) which is a nice touch. One thing that's bothering me though, is that it's straining credibility just a bit for Kagome and Inuyasha not to clue in that Kaede knows that Kagome's looking after him, I mean, the staff's seen them together for days after Kaede issued the little "stay away from her" punishment. And one more nit to pick; (last one hopefully) sane and insane aren't medical terms, they're legal ones. They have no bearing on a diagnosis. I don't see an actual doctor using them. Though given this place's track record, I'm betting that he's not a real doctor either (but it's possible that he at one time played one on TV). So... Sesshoumaru's a bastard? Don't think Inuyasha was quite clear on that... Hee. So important information at the beginning of the session... Hmmm... Taking what Inuyasha said literally in his three sentences... Sesshoumaru's mother was never married to his father, and his father has some sort of mental deficiency but still managed to roofie Inuyasha's mother and get her to Las Vegas for a quickie wedding. Am I close (...maybe you shouldn't answer that)? Now Kagome has another activity planned for them... I'm going to use my massive deductive powers to guess what it is. She seems to like lame activities that old people only do because they're old and their bodies are failing them... And you've ruled out bridge... So that leaves a rousing game of canasta or maybe euchre. But she also likes to harm animals in the guise of enjoying them. And loitering, can't forget loitering. So all in all, I'm guessing she wants to hang around outside a pet store like a mallrat and bang on the glass with the kittens behind it, even though the sign asks you not to... Or maybe fishing. It's probably fishing.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I knew he can't deny the feelings for her. Well I hope you update soon and keep up the funny, romance, and more that I really hope will come.
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: November 01, 2006 20:53 CST
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thanks for answering my questions =). i loove this story! your an awesome writer.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story of yours, its pretty funny. I hope you update soon and keep up at what you do best, making this story hilareus.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 08:14 CDT
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lol That was funny! I can't wait to find out what the are planning to do!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 01:06 CDT
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Oh great, you've got a big section with "Mistress" Kaede talking about punishments... Now I need to go scrub my brain. And I like how Kagome was all offended that Inuyasha was happy that he wouldn't have to deal with a fake doctor anymore. Like being nice is more important than getting good healthcare. But why did Miroku call in the first place? He really didn't say anything, it just seemed like it was an excuse for him to find out that Kagome was onto his lie. And since when is being indifferent a mental illness? And how does it point to someone being retarded? I know it's probably not an important part of the story, but that part just jumped out at me. Is this whole hospital thing just some weird behavioural experiment to find out what people will put up with? And Kagome should have Miroku's number, or does her phone service not have *69?
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: October 09, 2006 20:59 CDT
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umm... i dont get it. i got really confused. what going on with miroku and whos in charge of the facilty? whats gonna happen to inuyasha and kagome when miroku comes back. so many questions left unanswered!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 19:55 CDT
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YAY Sango's gone! So now does Inuyasha have to deal with another trainee or is Dr. No Time For Inuyasha actually going to do his job? I like how it took someone outside of the hospital to fire Sango. I assume this was the mystery phone woman. And Mistress Kaede? What, was Doctor not good enough for her? Unless they're a dominatrix, nobody is professionally known as "mistress anything." Please tell me Kaede isn't doubling as a dominatrix. That would kill me a little inside. The funniest thing though, was the doctor trying to let Sango down gently. I mean, if she's telling patients they're going to grow up to be serial killers and inducing them to attempt suicide, the time for being gentle has passed. I mean, really, if she doesn't know what the problem is (that she's terrible) she really can't get better. Did Kikyo mate with someone she wasn't supposed to? Or did she tell the press something that wasn't quite true as it applied to Inuyasha? Boo for not showing Inuyasha's reaction to Sango getting sacked. I've been waiting for that for a while.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 21:03 CDT
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....yeah u and ur editer are both on crack. ANYWAY CUTE chappie ~too short~ I was hoping they'd fire Sango..she SUCKS at being a shrink. I love it when Inu and his Youkai talk to each other. like "...How's the weather in denial?" cute UPDATE SOON!! Ja Ne!
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