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Reviewed By: Mingyu On: May 02, 2010 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Jesus Christ in a dessert cup! I FINALLY finished reading this, and it BLEW MY MIND. I had found this through a recommendation on deviantart, and THANK GAWD I actually clicked the damn link! The ending was SO depressing, yet I really loved it. The whole thing, that is. After "If It Makes You Happy" and "One," I thought it couldn't get any better. OBVIOUSLY I WAS WRONG. I was SO into this, I actually screamed at my best friend for talking while I was reading. Of course I apologized, but I was still miffed. It's THAT good. It makes me sad that Shiv died, as he is one of my favorites, but I'm glad he didn't die a douche C8 So, ya. Amazing. Best story I ever read. Seriously. THE BEST. Be proud; it kicked fanfiction in the testicles and then taunted it by making neener neener noises while its back was turned. WRITE MORE D8 I feel this needs another "chapter" to go with it, and yet...I dunno. I'm a little scared. BUT DON'T EVER STOP WRITING. EVAR! K. I'm done =_=;;;
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Reviewed By: J.Jaeger On: January 10, 2009 00:30 CST
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Jesus that was amazing. I spent days reading it, getting snappy when people would interrupt my reading. It really was amazing. The ending was adorable...I really thought that they were gonna die a lover's suicide. But I like this better XD; It really was amazing. Yup. But you getta hear this three years late. Hurrah! At least they're gonna be starting the show up again in feburary. I hope you write more from this fandom sometime... luffs
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Reviewed By: Gingeralli On: November 06, 2005 15:09 CST
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Halelujah! For months I was in agony because I couldn't find out where you went!!! It was at the most critical part of the trilogy and I was in tears, cursing fate's cruelty (more like ff.net) for nixing your fics at the most wrongest time. (I use the word wrongest because that's the most appropriate description). Now, I can rest easy knowing how it all ends. And I must say I've enjoyed everything from start to finish. This trilogy reaks with angst, death, sadness, passion, everything a fic lover could POSSIBLY want or need. Ms. Manga, I comend you on a more than fantastic job for your trilogy, even if you didn't like how it ended. I'm going to disregard your commentary in the beginning of the 27th chapter, because I loved where your characters ended up--NOT dead. You gave the characters a realistic touch, adding your own style, and your lemons were quite enjoyable too... ^_~ I can most definitely say, this is one of the best Static fics out there in existence.
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Reviewed By: Ebon4Shiv On: October 23, 2005 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O....It was something, a good something I think.
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Reviewed By: NME On: October 10, 2005 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gorgeous. That may not be the ending you were planning on and you may feel that your story sorta got out of your control; but either way it was brilliant. I am eager to read more of your work. Oh man, I feel like I'm going to cry now. I feel so sad for all your characters. This is perhaps the most "true" type of endings I've ever read. So wonderful. If you hated the way things sorta went out of hand (though I don't see any troubles with this story), maybe you could have some fun with one shots? That keeps things more under control. Or post multi-parters all at once. I don't think i would have the discipline for that. ;)
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Reviewed By: jigsaws231 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I was saddened by the ending, but that honestly has to be one of the best endings I've ever read. You didn't write it all fluffy and happy, because honestly, how could it end completely happy? Completely brilliant - I can only hope you write more. Also - thanks for your kind words. Glad my reviews made you happy :)
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Reviewed By: Blondi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You ended it. And made me cry. Poor Richie. Even poor Hotstreak, even keeping his word... I'll give him his excuse about his arm and wanting to see Richie before he goes to prison. Gotta love the Hotstreak and Richie!!!! I'm still shocked how it ended.... don't really know what to say, except for.... What next? There has to be something coming soon- you're too good for something not to. Please keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Shampoomarea20 On: October 04, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it..but one thing...please make a sequel of this!!!!!!!!!!! I still wanna read about it!!! I love this couple!!!!! Richie is a bit crazy =)
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Reviewed By: Im_alive On: October 04, 2005 11:02 CDT
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You made me cry again. I love Richie and now he's hardly Richie. I cried and hated Hotstreak, the jerk. And poor Virgil, it's like he's alone but he's not. I don't think I'm making any sense, but I'm depressed so it's allowed. There's more right? If so I hope it comes out soon otherwise I'm going to be reading this over and start crying again.
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Reviewed By: CeeCee or Kyaroru On: October 04, 2005 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::cackles evily:: I FOUND YOU! And you updated! yeay!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, the last I heard of you was chapt 25 on FF.net. So I'm glad you're still alive! But- you're still going to write other stuff right? Cause- it's your fault and all that I'm obsessed over your fics. ::starts singing badly:: How do I Live without you? .... ...... can't you tell I missed ya?
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: October 03, 2005 14:17 CDT
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It's almost caught up. Is it weird that I like the chapter where Hotstreak says he's gonna take Richie out with him the most. I just get all fangirlish when he calls Richie baby for the first time.
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Reviewed By: jigsaws231 On: October 03, 2005 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well - I finally found the fics! I was appalled one day when I was bored and went to FF.net to reread Right Here while waiting to see what would happen to Richie - only to discover it was completely gone!! I'm glad you found a new place to post them - now maybe one day I'll find out how it ends! Your stories are still great. (BTW, I hope 10 is the highest on the ratings...it doesn't really say..)
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: September 30, 2005 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he I just love reading this again. Sorry about the reviews thing, but I think it's mostly the spam filter. First few times I tried reviewing the spam thing wouldn't let me. It has a trick, write the code in lowercase then press enter instead of the submit botton. Hopefully you'll get more soon. (once again sorry if it post multiple times)
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: September 30, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he I just love reading this again. Sorry about the reviews thing, but I think it's mostly the spam filter. First few times I tried reviewing the spam thing wouldn't let me. It has a trick, write the code in lowercase then press enter instead of the submit botton. Hopefully you'll get more soon.
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Reviewed By: i_alive On: September 28, 2005 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I reread the story, why I don't know, but I am reminded of how I detest Ebon. On that note, more please.
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