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| "The Journey Within" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love it, so dramatic lol. I never could understand how people let those emotions take control like that, but hey, after trying to read a story without drama, I find that I should be greatful to all the great writers out there who add the emotion with everything else into their storyies like you did. much love to ya, I cant wait for an update, and I dont see anything wrong with the way its written and your grammer is good too :> keep up the great work, we all wait in anticipation for he next chapter to this eventful and origional story.
| Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 13:29 CDT
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oooooh, Its beautiful! Continue soon! Oh, Its very Well writen,s tory lune fantastic. I can't wait for the next chaoter. KKeep working at it, don't give up. Lotsa luv, Kiki
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 01:24 CDT
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Cute story, and one, hopefully, with a good end. Well, it's what most people look for in anime these days anyway, even though they never get it (Evangelion anyone?). Heh, ok, this story is pretty different, and a great choice to read for some light angst, and it is a good choice to read (plus hey, I am an Ed/Winry fan, personally, though Ed/Roy is pretty amusing, and pervy as hell too). I;ve enjoyed reading this story thus far, and look foward to future chapters. Please update often, as you have with teh chapters thus far. Good luck with this story, and life, Graypheonix.
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 22:59 CDT
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ok.... now I'm really confused... I already read and reviewed for that chapter, but the website says you just added it today... Did you repost it? Am I offically insane now?! Well, anyway, please update (again?) soon.
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 00:04 CDT
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Such cruelty... Making us wait with another cliff-hanger of doom. But that's ok because Ed PROPOSED!!! oh my freaking god Ed finally propsed!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! ^^ ... Ok, moment of hyper and hormonal teen over with. Anyway, please, please, please update again soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 16:00 CDT
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*your fic. Sorry!
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 15:57 CDT
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Noooo!! You can't just end that there!! This is one of the cutest, fluffiest fics I've read in a very long time that is actually well-written and you end the new chapter on a very evil (but cute) cliff-hanger. There's something very screwed up about that. >< So please, please, please, please, please, please, please update very very soon. Please? I love you fic!^^
| Reviewed By: tin-tin On: July 18, 2006 11:00 CDT
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this fic is one of the best FMA fics that i've ever read! Keep up the good work and update soon.
| Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 15:52 CDT
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You know, I'm not much of a fan of this couple but you're story made me start to like it. Please update, I really need to know how Ed handles this. HUUURRRRRYYYYYY!!!!!! And keep up the good work ^_^
| Title: pleeease UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: haiku_amarante [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story...I read it a while ago and just realized I didn't review! So here it is...this is really really great, and I'm sure a lot of people would love for you to update. ^^
| Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 20:02 CDT
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tghis is good. u should def continue w/ it
| Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 19:18 CST
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I love your fanfic!im full of curiosity, please continue updating
| Reviewed By: Sariyona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is the sweetest story...really captures Ed's angst and guilt. Can't wait for updates, but I understand about crazy life :)
| Title: An e-mail I recieved...
Reviewed By: The Cerulean Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 21:05 CDT
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*NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR* I got this e-mail today from a wonderful person that just made my night :-) Thanks so much for reviewing, it give me the warm fuzzies. And I like those. Ja ne! ~The Cerulean Alchemist~ Hi, my name's Mental. I'd post the review like a normal person but it's so damn hard! everytime I tryt o review on something, mediaminer.org won't ket me so I'm just gonna e-mail you the review. I love your fic! It's so sweet and different from other fics that I've read. I'm guessing that your major in college is in the english department. You're a really exilent writer. I tend to only read comedy fics since other genres make me depresed, but this actually made me happy inside, and trust me I needed that after 7 hours of responding "yes Leutenant Colonel" or "no Leutenant Colonel" or "Shut the hell up cadet". Than you for providing such a great fic. It's better than most books I've read. I gotta go find ways to shut up the other caddets so bye and update soon!
| Reviewed By: EvilWarlordGu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! ahhh! I love it! It's so in character! I wanna know what happens next! please write more soon!
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