| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Title: Broken Butterfly
Reviewed By: Broken Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 10:19 PDT
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I really love your story. I can't wait for your next instalment. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: October 18, 2006 21:23 PDT
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Please, if you do anything else to the kid, DON'T NAME HIM TARO!!! It's like Sakura for a girl, WAAAYY overused. Have a nameing contest or something, that's always fun. Here's my contribution : Kenjishi I don't know if it means anything, but it popped into my head one day and didn't leave. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT,GREAT CHAPTER!!! It's a boy, do you have any names yet? I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: October 18, 2006 19:24 PDT
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for a minute there i thought you were gonna let us hang until another update! yay, a little boy! i love how you portrayed midoriko. i'd like to think she would be able to look inside those willing to use the jewel and help them through their choice. after all, it ensures her freedom.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't believe the jewel was finally purified!! I'm so happy we finally got to know the sex of the baby. I wanted a girl, but a boy is wonderful too. Keep up the good work. Update soon because I can't wait for more!!!!
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Title: Shikon is gone-a
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 16:01 PDT
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I rather liked your version of the purification of the Shikon and the similarities between naraku's control and that on the new and improved Inuyasha. I wonder what his brother will think. I'm so glad it's a boy! I can't wait to read the reaction.
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Reviewed By: kt On: October 18, 2006 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! this story is so good...and the wish really IS a selfless wish the way he wants to use it! man! what a chapter! GREAT chapter! update when you can (soon would be better though)!
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 14:56 PDT
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Man that was a close poll!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 14:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AAAAHHH!! YEAH!!! IT'S A BOY!! InuYasha has control. Wonderful!!!
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Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 10:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chap! but did you have to stop there, i was all hooked and wondering what happened to the village and then the chapter stopped! oh well, i guess i'll have to wait. Thanks for updating! =D
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 07:34 PDT
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curiosity better not maime the hanyou. inuyasha should know better than to decide to investigate something when his mate is in labor! silly puppy. i can't wait to see what they finally have!
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Reviewed By: melf On: October 17, 2006 05:29 PDT
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u just love to leave cliffys dont u? please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: October 17, 2006 00:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: aluna87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! I think I scared away my neighbors when I got to the "end" and said a few choice words...loudly. Damn those cliffhangers! ^_^ You're writing has really gotten much better as the story went on (not that it was bad in the first place) and seems to flow much more naturally, but maybe that's just me losing myself in the story eh? VERY well done! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Uzumaki_Kariudo On: October 13, 2006 02:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rate this high because I've noticed that your writing style has improved as you go along in the chapters. Also, it is a funny and enjoyable fic, so please write more! And I wish I had some candy to give you for the "Horrible, Hideous, Fluffy" quote.
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