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| "The Snare" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i'm glad i found this. i had no idea that you had started a sequel. i hope you continue this fic. i am looking forward to the upcoming "trip", sess/rin and finding out what nobunaga wants with mushin. you are so funny. your stories make me laugh. X DDD
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 17:06 CST
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Ok, first I want to say this: HA! I don't know why, but the way you ended this chapter struck me as hilarious. Well done. The chapter was written excellently, and I really can't see any flaws with it. Admittedly, the section where Sesshoumaru was confronting the driver didn't flow quite as well as the rest, but it really wasn't a flaw. It just wasn't as smooth as the rest of this wonderful submission. I can't really find anything that needs improvement except for that small section...it just didn't flow as well. Great visuals, I like the dialogue, and the way you characterized Sesshoumaru, as well as Inuyasha. Thank you so much for you submission to FFARG, keep up the great work, and thanks for the excellent read!
| Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: October 12, 2005 23:47 CDT
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SNICKER, that part about the pantry was a shriek!! Why does Nobunaga want Mushin so badly? Can't wait to see what you do next.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started reading this, Im like, what the? Till I read on. I am so glad I have you on favorites. Thank you so much for a sequal,(did i spell that right). I wasnt sure you would make one or not, but am glad you did. Cant wait for for an update.
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