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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so much. I forgot to mention the last time I reviewed how much I enjoy the idea of the house kami. How clever is it to -for all practical purposes-carry your house around with you? I suppose an accurate analogy would be key rather than house. In any case, good one. I thought the sea hag's stolen house was interesting. It reminds me of a story I read when I was little. I think it was called baba yaga or something like that. Some Slavic tale. I keep wondering if Kagome (and I), will find out how old Shippou is in this story. Well, let's see if the updater works, shall we?
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: August 09, 2006 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Yay, the sea slug is dead. Now, to find out who is spreading the nasty rumors about InuYasha. That is, if InuYasha can avoid Jaken's elephant tranquilizer.
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Title: 10's
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 12:53 CDT
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Cafe de Feminin d' Hygiene? This is the first time I've read anything of yours. I am glad to see I get to do plenty more reading. This story is so clever; and I love the way you have written the characters. Nothing syrupy, well rounded and each with their own voice. Such talent. I even find Rin likeable. Her personality usually isn't developed much in other writings. You're just full of surprises, aren't you Marie? Oh, and thank you for the surprises.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: adamilej On: July 04, 2006 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories please update soon. J
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Reviewed By: ravynstone_abbey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 21:50 CDT
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Wow. Really good and a walk sideways into a different world. What fun :) Poor Kagome, having to take care of that sluggy thing-sorta like Pearl in Blade mixed with Jabba.
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: July 03, 2006 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! Brilliant as always......what on earth is this demon that has Kagome captive? A cross between Jabba the Hut and a sea cucumber keeps coming to mind....
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 02, 2006 23:50 CDT
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So is that one of the cannibals that found Kagome? Save her Inuyasha! Oh and I love your stories, you're quite talented
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Reviewed By: Thiemo Guenther On: April 07, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't commented in a while, but I've been reading every chapter as soon as I've gotten the alert. Youkai society in modern day Tokyo has no idea what their in for, do they. Especially the way the strength of Youkai powers seems to have dwindled over the centuries. Add a modern miko who is probably one the most powerful of her kind, in the past and future, and they had best tread carefully. Especially since Kagome seems to have access to charms and spells that actually work. I wonder if she could give her grandfather some? ^_^ I wonder why the old legends have Inuyasha being the instigator of the yokai slaughter? Since the legends are already written, It'll be I/K's word against the old histories wouldn't it? Unless the world in the future adjusts itself seamlessly for whatever actions the Inu-tachi make. I wonder what Sesshomaru is going to be doing about Kagome's expulsion? She's family now, and regardless of his feelings towards her and his brother, he doesn't allow anyone to besmirch the families honor, does he. He of course owes her a debt for reviving Rin as well. Can Sesshoumaru use the void attack with Tenseiga that has been revealed in the manga? Not to mention the Tetsaiga's ability to absorb youkai powers..Perhaps Kagome could try to research what the human chronicles say about the events that they are being involved in? Certainly she must have learned what the history books say, but there are probably alternate sources that tell a different version of events. Ultimately, I wonder how the Inu-tachi deal with this adventure, since this time they'll have to deal with humans. Kagome's seen plenty of death and devastation in the quest for the Shikon, but their foes have always been yokai. Would she be able to kill humans to defend innocent yokai? Well, she'd probably errect a barrier, but that may not be enough... I look forward to the next chapter. Thiemo Guenther (Geshron Tyler)
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Reviewed By: gittelbug(when logged in) On: April 07, 2006 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pure awsomeness as always
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Long awaited, but good. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: bk On: December 19, 2005 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your other story and when I saw the sequal I couldn'y wait to read it. I loved your previous story and I am sure this will become one of my favorites as well. Keep up the good work. I will be watching for your updates.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i'm glad i found this. i had no idea that you had started a sequel. i hope you continue this fic. i am looking forward to the upcoming "trip", sess/rin and finding out what nobunaga wants with mushin. you are so funny. your stories make me laugh. X DDD
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 17:06 CST
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Ok, first I want to say this: HA! I don't know why, but the way you ended this chapter struck me as hilarious. Well done. The chapter was written excellently, and I really can't see any flaws with it. Admittedly, the section where Sesshoumaru was confronting the driver didn't flow quite as well as the rest, but it really wasn't a flaw. It just wasn't as smooth as the rest of this wonderful submission. I can't really find anything that needs improvement except for that small section...it just didn't flow as well. Great visuals, I like the dialogue, and the way you characterized Sesshoumaru, as well as Inuyasha. Thank you so much for you submission to FFARG, keep up the great work, and thanks for the excellent read!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: October 12, 2005 23:47 CDT
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SNICKER, that part about the pantry was a shriek!! Why does Nobunaga want Mushin so badly? Can't wait to see what you do next.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started reading this, Im like, what the? Till I read on. I am so glad I have you on favorites. Thank you so much for a sequal,(did i spell that right). I wasnt sure you would make one or not, but am glad you did. Cant wait for for an update.
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