| "The Pain of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: mae_may On: May 31, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW SO KEWL!!!!! PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ KEEP WRITING!!!! I RELY LUB IT!!!!:D OH.. N IZ DA STORI GONNA B KYO X TOHRU??
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Oogieone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you are going with this...please update soon...I hope she ends up with Yuki...I always feel so sorry for him at the end of the anime. But, either way I can't wait to read more! If you like Fruits Basket, Chek out my fanfic. 'Tainted Choices'. I think you'll like it!
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: May 03, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
REALLY NICE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT 2 READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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Title: Nice ending
Reviewed By: InuMaru_89 On: January 07, 2006 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you leave your reader in suspence. im like that too keep up the good work and keep the chap.s coming!
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: InuMaru_89 On: January 07, 2006 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like a story with a good twist to it, like a love triangle. i like your writing style. keep writing i would like to know what will happen to Tohru, Kyo, and Yuki! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Reedee On: January 01, 2006 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good writing. Hurry up and write the next chapter, I can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good. I have to agree with robineivets, you leave the reader in the dust at the end...so you need to continue soon! I liked that Tohru finally spoke up against Akito, and your writing style made a clear picture that I could see while reading. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: robineivets [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic. The only thing is you leave the readers in the dust at the end but other than that...nice!
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