| "The Pain of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: 80FuRuBa08 On: July 19, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was an extremely good fanfic! Please write the next chapter soon! I love the love triangle! Good luck!
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Title: This is really good.
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 13:43 CDT
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DO NOT quit writing this..... Un finished fica give me ideas for new ones! And I don't want to steal your idea! Thats the LAST thing I want, Just keep writng... Its Soooooo good.
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Reviewed By: mae_may On: July 12, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it's me.. i've read all ur updated chaps. n so far i still think it's great:) I'm rely srrry bout ur bf though :(... he seems like a gud person (even though i never met him..) I hope u n evryone will b okay plz keep it up kay?! ^_^ -ur stories r also in my favorites tehheeeee.....!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelkitty13 On: July 09, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ive loved your story so far!!! its great and i love how u r mixing everything up and making it different from the books!!!! i really and truly love it!!! please update soon. i am dying to know what happens -angelkitty13- :p
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Reviewed By: lava On: July 08, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that story was so cute please write more
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Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:54 CDT
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She should end up with Kyo by the way... They're made for eachother... Yuki can go rot... somewhere.... Or go with Machi,they make more sence than anything....
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Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:51 CDT
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This is so good!! I felt like I was reading the manga!! xDDD Keep writing! Your in my favorites!! >W
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: mae_may On: May 31, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW SO KEWL!!!!! PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ KEEP WRITING!!!! I RELY LUB IT!!!!:D OH.. N IZ DA STORI GONNA B KYO X TOHRU??
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Oogieone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you are going with this...please update soon...I hope she ends up with Yuki...I always feel so sorry for him at the end of the anime. But, either way I can't wait to read more! If you like Fruits Basket, Chek out my fanfic. 'Tainted Choices'. I think you'll like it!
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: May 03, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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REALLY NICE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT 2 READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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Title: Nice ending
Reviewed By: InuMaru_89 On: January 07, 2006 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you leave your reader in suspence. im like that too keep up the good work and keep the chap.s coming!
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: InuMaru_89 On: January 07, 2006 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like a story with a good twist to it, like a love triangle. i like your writing style. keep writing i would like to know what will happen to Tohru, Kyo, and Yuki! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Reedee On: January 01, 2006 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good writing. Hurry up and write the next chapter, I can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good. I have to agree with robineivets, you leave the reader in the dust at the end...so you need to continue soon! I liked that Tohru finally spoke up against Akito, and your writing style made a clear picture that I could see while reading. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: robineivets [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic. The only thing is you leave the readers in the dust at the end but other than that...nice!
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