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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2005 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO...let's get this straight. Kagome is grizzled and chasing the self-loathing idiot of a hanyou. PLUS Shippou is a little shit! Boy what a dysfunctional family. Kagome better find Inuyasha and salp some sense into that boy! btw, thanks for the compliment! You're a great writer!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2005 22:21 EDT
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Aww....Shippo kawaiiness. So, do we get a choice on the cookies? If I say you are a wonderful writer, do I get chocolate chip? Hehe, shameless begging aside, I do love this story so far.
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Title: Queen
Reviewed By: Cait the Great On: October 04, 2005 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH!!!! CLIFFIE?!?! If you REALLY love me, you'll update, lol!
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Reviewed By: Arwey On: October 04, 2005 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously love your story, and you'll disappoint at least one person should you choose not to continue it! Your writing style is so beautiful that I actually cried during chapter 3 (crying is not something I do often, so I congratulate you on this feat). I was so worried when I lost the link to this story, but then you updated, so it was all go. I truly cannot wait for the rest of the story, and I hope you decide to continue it!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so sad and introspective. It's nice to have Inuyasha's pov. It really helps develop his character further. Greatly anticipating the next update ;)
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 18:05 EDT
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Well, you've definitely caught my attention. Good story so far. Keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooo, another chapter! So many harsh words. I'm glad Inuyasha wants to take responsibility...now hopefully he does it right the first time around!
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Reviewed By: mistressJae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 20:51 EDT
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I'm loving the story so far, can't wait to read some more chapters..KEEP GOING!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Vamp_Kittenz On: October 02, 2005 16:55 EDT
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Keep goin'! Poor Kagome, ne? I really like the story so far. I only wish you'd written Kagome's reaction when they realized Inuyasha was gone, I'd be curious about that...but then, there's plenty else to be curious about! Anyway, like I said, keep going, this is a good story! (as if I didn't say so already...)
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Reviewed By: Luvspanky On: October 02, 2005 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SO depressing, I almost cried! Continue on with the agnst!
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Title: Failure
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 13:56 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In all the fanfictions I've ever read, I've never read about Kagome being this sad. This is truly a wonderful fic. Don't worry about non-reviewers. Keep up the wonderful writing ^__^
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Reviewed By: stalicon On: October 02, 2005 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing,I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poop on all those non-reviewers. I think this story is great! It seems like you really have a great story line going here and each character's self-reflection is impressive. I can feel the anguish. Please keep up the great work! I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!!! Thanks!
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Title: Looking forward to more
Reviewed By: thoughts On: October 01, 2005 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful fiction for many reasons. First of all, you can see Kagome and Inuyasha managing to get to this point in their relationship due to their existing behavior. Secondly, the inner thoughts of Inuyasha are consistent with his mannerisms in the story. It is a lovely look into the mind of Inuyasha. Even his running away to try to figure it out seems right. I certainly hope you will continue with this fiction. It is beautifully written and very compelling.
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