| "The Hits Keep Coming" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Heta nsi On: August 26, 2006 14:16 CDT
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"Smug Omi + Blushing Ken + Bouncing Bed added up to a total that staggered him." That was my undoing. *claps her hands* Poor Yohji, it must be hard to be so confused (no pun intended, of course ^_~).
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Reviewed By: soxy On: August 26, 2006 00:11 CDT
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God I love it! Just like Yohji I totally did not connect the bouncing bed with anything but heee! Great chapter can't wait for more so... Update Soon!
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Title: you're...
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 19:17 CDT
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...fantabulifous!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 12:09 CDT
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Yay! I love this fic. It's so fun! ^_^ And my goodness... For once Ken and Omi were the loud ones, eh? Hahaaaah! I hope that everything gets um...sorted out...between Yohji and Aya soon, though. (Translation: I do so hope they shag again soon)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 11:42 CDT
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i am so glad you're still working on your WIP. i wonder how many assassins in the world own bunny slippers...speaking of the chibi, he finally got some, eh? it seems you're implying that the Meep had something to do with this? it's an aphrodisiac Meep? as opposed to the kind that just eats all your food and takes over your starship with unstoppable reproduction...
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 10:35 CDT
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I think the Meep is getting all the treats it can handle... So glad to see another chapter! More, please!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 08:21 CDT
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O. M. G.!!!!!!!!!! Whew. That was such a good chapter, but I totally feel Yohji's pain and confusion. The part about Omi jumping on the bed was HILARIOUS. I have no other way to express the emphatic BRILLIANCE other than to use all caps, which must be terribly annoying, but really, you can't blame me because that chapter was so awesome that I read it all the way through without pause just as this sentence is without pause. MORE!!!! Poor Yohji! Mean Aya, yanking poor Yohji about with mind blowing sex and then leaving him tied to an ignominious scooter, of all things. ps. I think I'm second, although the third post for this chapter.
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Title: and....
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 06:17 CDT
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i was first!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 06:17 CDT
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hehe a whole chapter, all mine *hugs chapter* mine mine mine mine
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Reviewed By: Katami Foxxe On: July 08, 2006 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely love you and that was totally hot. You need to write more
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Reviewed By: Cierzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 22:32 CDT
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Yes, I do love you. Even if this is not my favourite fic of yours, I can't help but adore your style. The surreal part with the drugs effect and everything didn't convince me much, but as it lead to the scene in the shower and Yohji's realization that it hadn't been a dream, I'm really glad you came up with it. When he touches his nape and KNOWS... what a thrilling moment! I loved it. Wonderful lemons, as always, and even better characterization of Yohji (as always, too!). The phrase "Survival was overrated" was just genial. My God, what a question... we don't only love you, WE NEED YOU!!
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Reviewed By: Le poete On: May 18, 2006 01:02 CDT
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That was great. I want MORE!
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Title: i'm 101!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'd have to agree with omni and the squicking by the blood thing...but *drool* and yohji's gonna be so pissed with himself that he agree to be aya's, and then pissed at aya for leaving him there *snicker* can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Lodrelhai On: May 07, 2006 17:20 CDT
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...that Meep exudes some kind of phermone that lowers inhibitions, doesn't it? If Aya figures that out he'll be after the thing with his katana - while Yohji'll be sneaking it into Aya's room every chance he gets. ^_^ Lovely bit of smex there, can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 19:12 CDT
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It...it didn't post all of my review...just the first letter. How...odd. Anyway, as I said in the review that you can't see... I love you, yes. Even though I was a little squicked by the blood. But still...Possessive Aya...tied-up Yohji... Yeah, I can't really complain. And poor Yotan left there like that!
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