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Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: ??? On: June 06, 2006 00:13 CDT
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PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ITS REALLY REALLY GOOD ^^
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 04:00 CDT
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*hisses softly* Cliffie, eh? *eyeballs you* More!!! *cough* okay, that being a particularly "not me" kind of review, I don't really know what else to say. All my poor brain can think is that I want to read more, lol. Please?
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Reviewed By: YoukaiObsessed (NLI) On: June 03, 2006 22:24 CDT
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Ohhs what a cliffy!--Thank you so much for updating. I was soo happy to see a update on this story, I do so love your writing and your stories.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 01:11 CST
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I'm glad you got inspiration. ^^ This was a good chapter. Maintained interest throughout and only one spelling error that I noticed off the bat. Good job and I hope to see more from you soon. ~Dark Avenger
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 07:43 CST
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I was so happy to see an update on this. I have missed your writing. You know I love the angst and darkness of it.--Hope to see more soon!
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave 7/10 for style of writing because the format is kind of odd in places, and sometimes hard to read, but overall nowhere near the worst I've seen. Spelling & Grammar got a 5/10 because I think you could benefit from a beta-reader, someone to edit your work, or at the very least, a spell checker of some kind. You said, I believe, that your main goal was better overall writing and grammar, so I mention this to help you. Originality/Creativity got a 9/10 because it is both original and creative, as well as fairly well thought out. Enjoyment factor is a 9/10 because I did, in fact, enjoy it. Overall rating is 8/10, kinda of an average of all my ratings. Please do not take this to be a flame, I do enjoy this fic and will continue to read it as you update it. ~Dark Avenger
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 19:35 CST
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I thought I'd let you know, in the beginning of chapter 9 you said that you don't own Kenshin because you gave Bankotsu's family the name of Batosai. However, Batosai literally means man-slayer and is more of a title than a last name. I wouldn't say it's an issue that you've used it as one, I just thought you might like to know that 1) you don't need to disclaim it because it's a real word, not made up by the creators of Kenshin and 2) it could come of use later. I've been liking the story so far and look forward to reading more in a few minutes. ^_^ ~Dark Avenger
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 05:46 CST
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I was sooooooooooo happy when I got the notification in my e-mail that you updated! You so made my month. Wonderful chapter, it was sad to see the two lovers die. Now I wonder what's in store for Sesshoumaru and Rin. As always wonder job on this!*swats spam code--try 7 now*
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best xmas present i could have recieved. 2-3 more chapts. I can't wait. (I start praying now that Sess/Rin live till the end) I know i know you are a dark fic writer but a girl can hope for the best. I can't wait to see the next chap. and I can;t wait till Naraku gets what he deserves! Poor Rin I can't figure out what you are going to do with her next (which just shows how good of a writer you are). I love the fact that sesshy didnt succomb to the darkness because he thought of her. Ok enough from me... like always i love your work!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 15:59 CST
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I really love this fic, Naraku is so fuckin evil lol. Update plz!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 03:40 CST
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Thank you soooooo much for updating this. I was trying to bribe Ra into writing something for me earlier. Haha_ I was dieing, I am being waffed to near death! Wows again on everything that is going on with Sesshoumaru. I loved the way you showed the difference between the darkness and the light of his ethereal beauty. Thank you again!
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Title: You know I'm your Number one Fan at this point...
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to make sure you haven't forgetten this story :). I think we have one more chapter to go before its get to the BRAND NEW chapter I've been waiting for. Anyway I still take great enjoyment from reading your story ... but it always leaves me wanting more. I hope to read you soon.
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Title: i love it!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this story made me cry when naraku did that to sesshomaru!! you need to write more! i feel like i'm actually rin or something! whoa, your a great writer! you should really write more! please!!! could you review mine maybe? or my poems!!?? ok great job and update soon pleasE!!!!!!!!
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Title: oh wow!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! you have to keep writing you kmust!! i love this fic omg! your talented! i like the whol plot line and the rin and sesshy thing. it isn't common to have a story without an inu/kag pairing but you did it! and i like it! great job! please update! i would really like to read more!
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Reviewed By: ladyrinremix(sign) On: October 03, 2005 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank god you took my advice. I hope this site doesn't give you any trouble and I do look forward to the new upcoming chapters.
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