| "Fleeting Inspiration" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me he gets a mirror!!! oh my god...there are so many favourite lines in here...but i especially like the monk getting hit on the head with the phone...I'm glad i decided to read this at home instead of at work! I wouldve gotten fired for laughing my ass off like a hyena! In my opinion - you are due for an update...im just desperate for the next chapter! I love this fic and i love you for writing it...im gonna go read your other gravi one now. *leaves obsessed offering of assorted expensive chocolate - and some skittles* Lotta love - Miss Macabre
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Reviewed By: Rin_r On: January 12, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I've read a couple of Gravitation fanfics, but there aren't that many I finish or keep coming back to. This is the first one I'm actually reviewing. I'm very picky as I am a fan of the series... In my opinion your fic is one of the best I've ever read. It's true to the charachters of Gravitation but at the same time original plot wise. It's funny, exciting, romantic and sometimes also scary. It's also very well written. There's a good mix of action and dialog, your vocabulary is varied and you do not get caught in the same way of expressing things. I can't be specific on sentence structure or grammar as English is my second language. I can only say that I haven't noticed anything way off on those points. As an earlier reviewer mentioned I also appreciate that you've held out the love scenes and spent time adding substance to your story. It makes it even better. I can't really think of any constructive criticism even... It's that good in my opinion. Very much looking forward to your next update!
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Title: (^^)
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 20:33 CST
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Yatta!! (o^^o) I was so happy to come home to see that you updated!! Those were great chapters. I really felt sorry for Eiri though when he had his bad dream. >< And for Shu-chan. Well, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I do also really appreaciate you taking time to write Fleeting Inspiration. (^^) It's so great! Oh and gomen nasi I left so many reviews last time!! My computer was kind of being weird.
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Reviewed By: Mill On: December 27, 2005 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL! MORE! ^^
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read every chapter that you have written so far and I am throughly impressed by this masterpiece!! (-^^-) This by far is my favorite Gravitation fanfic ever. It feels so real to me, almost like I could see it really happening in the anime and manga. You captured everyone's character perfectly. I really also love the interacton between Yuki and Shuichi!! It's perfect. Just everthing about Fleeting Inspiration is. I am looking so forward to your next update!!
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read every chapter that you have written so far and I am throughly impressed by this masterpiece!! (-^^-) This by far is my favorite Gravitation fanfic ever. It feels so real to me, almost like I could see it really happening in the anime and manga. You captured everyone's character perfectly. I really also love the interacton between Yuki and Shuichi!! It's perfect. Just everthing about Fleeting Inspiration is. I am looking so forward to your next update!!
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read every chapter that you have written so far and I am throughly impressed by this masterpiece!! (-^^-) This by far is my favorite Gravitation fanfic ever. It feels so real to me, almost like I could see it really happening in the anime and manga. You captured everyone's character perfectly. I really also love the interacton between Yuki and Shuichi!! It's perfect. Just everthing about Fleeting Inspiration is. I am looking so forward to your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Mill On: December 15, 2005 13:21 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL! That book won't leave them alone won't it? ^^
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Reviewed By: kuramaandkarasu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for submitting to FFRG! First off, I loved it. The characterization was perfect, and I could actually see the interaction between Yuki and Shuuichi being plausible. There were minor grammatical errors, but they were only noticable if you're nitpicky about such things. Overall, it was well paced and put together nicely. Very nice.
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Title: FFRG Ch1
Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:05 CST
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Good morning and thank you for submitting to the FFRG, I'll start off mentioning that I'm a fan of Gravitation. As for the story itself, there are words that add more to your narration and there are words that take away, shitty is a word that takes away. There are different words that can get your point across, substandard, inferior, second-rate, and mediocre. Along those lines, one can get what I mean. Overall, I've got very, very little to criticize here. You've done the kind of romance story that I love, mainly 'love' in the first chapters without 'doing' much. It's so much more dignified to lead into that in the later chapters. Good work. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: discreet On: November 27, 2005 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations, you have just written a really really GrEaT story! I love your writing style, it has this casual yet professional sense. Its not so often that I actually find this type, its one of a kind and so is this!! You've done a real great job! Keep up the good work and please IJpđĄŦĒ soon!!^^
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Title: FFARG: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I knew that "Feeling Inspirations" reached out toward my particular tastes when I started reading that first interesting line, but this was especially brilliant and I would like to point it out: Eiri forfeited his stare-off with the computer to glare at the singer. I really appreciate when writers use words in novel ways. Admittedly, there were a few errors such as typos and forgetting commas for direct address, so one fine-combing before proceeding to write more entertaining chapters would be probably be beneficial. Overall though, this was one funny chapter. The vocab was smart. I laughed, I smiled, I even covered my mouth in shock at one point. Highly entertaining, and I think you for submitting to FFARG! -Dee-chan
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Reviewed By: chocho On: November 10, 2005 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I usually don't review because I'm not that good at critiquing things, but I just had to say that it's a great story. I also wanted to say that in a few countries in Europe, they actaully do serve alcohol in fast food restaurants (France I think is one of them). Too bad they did not vacation there. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mill On: October 24, 2005 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! PWEASE! This is SO funny!
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Reviewed By: Noryn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update! ^-^ its really funny
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