| "Fleeting Inspiration" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read every chapter that you have written so far and I am throughly impressed by this masterpiece!! (-^^-) This by far is my favorite Gravitation fanfic ever. It feels so real to me, almost like I could see it really happening in the anime and manga. You captured everyone's character perfectly. I really also love the interacton between Yuki and Shuichi!! It's perfect. Just everthing about Fleeting Inspiration is. I am looking so forward to your next update!!
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read every chapter that you have written so far and I am throughly impressed by this masterpiece!! (-^^-) This by far is my favorite Gravitation fanfic ever. It feels so real to me, almost like I could see it really happening in the anime and manga. You captured everyone's character perfectly. I really also love the interacton between Yuki and Shuichi!! It's perfect. Just everthing about Fleeting Inspiration is. I am looking so forward to your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Mill On: December 15, 2005 13:21 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL! That book won't leave them alone won't it? ^^
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Reviewed By: kuramaandkarasu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for submitting to FFRG! First off, I loved it. The characterization was perfect, and I could actually see the interaction between Yuki and Shuuichi being plausible. There were minor grammatical errors, but they were only noticable if you're nitpicky about such things. Overall, it was well paced and put together nicely. Very nice.
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Title: FFRG Ch1
Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:05 CST
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Good morning and thank you for submitting to the FFRG, I'll start off mentioning that I'm a fan of Gravitation. As for the story itself, there are words that add more to your narration and there are words that take away, shitty is a word that takes away. There are different words that can get your point across, substandard, inferior, second-rate, and mediocre. Along those lines, one can get what I mean. Overall, I've got very, very little to criticize here. You've done the kind of romance story that I love, mainly 'love' in the first chapters without 'doing' much. It's so much more dignified to lead into that in the later chapters. Good work. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: discreet On: November 27, 2005 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations, you have just written a really really GrEaT story! I love your writing style, it has this casual yet professional sense. Its not so often that I actually find this type, its one of a kind and so is this!! You've done a real great job! Keep up the good work and please IJpđĄŦĒ soon!!^^
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Title: FFARG: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I knew that "Feeling Inspirations" reached out toward my particular tastes when I started reading that first interesting line, but this was especially brilliant and I would like to point it out: Eiri forfeited his stare-off with the computer to glare at the singer. I really appreciate when writers use words in novel ways. Admittedly, there were a few errors such as typos and forgetting commas for direct address, so one fine-combing before proceeding to write more entertaining chapters would be probably be beneficial. Overall though, this was one funny chapter. The vocab was smart. I laughed, I smiled, I even covered my mouth in shock at one point. Highly entertaining, and I think you for submitting to FFARG! -Dee-chan
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Reviewed By: chocho On: November 10, 2005 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I usually don't review because I'm not that good at critiquing things, but I just had to say that it's a great story. I also wanted to say that in a few countries in Europe, they actaully do serve alcohol in fast food restaurants (France I think is one of them). Too bad they did not vacation there. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mill On: October 24, 2005 18:48 CDT
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UPDATE! PWEASE! This is SO funny!
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Reviewed By: Noryn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update! ^-^ its really funny
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