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| "The Offering" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 04:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my thoughts on your question? just put the scene in, who cares if anyone throws a fit. it's your fanfic & the rating is obvious. =) also, as far as your writing is concerned, it is wonderful...i think you are too hard on yourself. ;) cant wait for the next chapter!! also, are you going to continue any of your other fanfics? catch you later...
| Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: January 12, 2008 00:02 EST
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I was wondering... I just saw your profile and many of your stories are discontinued. For real? I was hoping that you'd finish them... Will you still write other stories involving this couple? You have a very unique way to portray them and I like it. It is rather refreshing to read your stories.
| Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: January 11, 2008 18:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put in the chapter, but tell the readers before and at the end. That way, We'll either read it or skip it. Great chapter by the way!! ^_^ Never expected mermaids! That was a good surprise!
| Title: Answer
Reviewed By: NakedFlowers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 17:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally think you should just include the piece in the chapter. I was thinking over a similar delima in one of my own stories. But, the stories have ratings for a reason, with reading a higher rated story comes the maturity and understanding that their may be some things of more graphic nature, like lemons or in this case rape. If you feel that you want to warn people, warn them in the beginning of the chapter and then maybe put a little line of ~*~*~* before and after the scene so they can skip it and continue with the chapter if they wish. You should definately NOT cripple your own creativity and writing in order to remove something that you wanted to put into the story for other people, if they don't feel up to reading it, perhaps they shouldn't read higher rated storiesm, or they can skim down the page until that part is over like you would have to in a real published book. You don't get to tell the published author to take out a scene and they don't hear you if you complain. If people do bellyache about it, just ignore them. Most of all, write for yourself first, don't cripple your creativity and don't let other's tell you what should be taken out or not. Okies, that was a lot of writing... >.>; sorries. Well, on a slightly different note. WOW, that was really creative, quite the twist what with mermaids in the bath and all... le gasp! Do they spy on Lord Fluffy?! ^.~ Just joking. I thought it was really creative, but I do have one thing to critique, the way that you ended the chapter kind of removed the other characters from the story. It's not neccessarily a bad thing, but if someone had been away for a while and was just getting back in to this story it may have been a let down. There you have it, my only critique, loved the rest and can't wait for the next chapter! Wishes for love and great writing, Rhapsody
| Reviewed By: Lucarna On: January 11, 2008 04:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put it in the chapter but label when it starts and finishes so people can choose weather they want to read it or not.
| Reviewed By: sesshou-saseko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 01:19 EST
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Thank you for coming back and not abandoning this fic. I agree with DarkMe... I am for the rape scene.
| Title: Post it all
Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Post it, you have the rating marked for it and you have given warning. If you want to give an option mark the scene where it starts and ends so the squimish can skip it. Other than that I say write it and post it, its darn annoying having to hunt down complete editions.
| Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: January 02, 2008 02:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never thought that I'd see the next chapter out so soon! Oh well, who am I to complain? ^_~ Just say that you'll finish your stories and I'll be fine. As long as it does not take you a whole year to update again, you're okay in my book! ^_^ Though, a sooner update wouldn't hurt at all... I can't wait to find out what happened to Kagome. Poor girl, Sesshoumaru is going to be so pissed off that he will not event let the female breath in peace when he gets her back. SO... could you update as soon as you can? Like, fast? XD 'Cause I wanna know!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 22:57 EST
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Oh my! A face in the water? Ehhh?! I'm not really a fan of Sess/Kag, but I just had to try this fanfic out and I love it! The way you made Sess act was so cute, I just loved it. I can't wait to hear more, please update soon. Ahah, how ever did you get the idea to make Inuyasha 'lend' Kagome off to Sess? That is like, the best idea. Anyway, congrats on such a great idea and update soon, please.
| Title: Coolio
Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: December 24, 2007 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I love this pairing and the situation you are using. Good work. Can't wait to see what's going on with the face and all. Please update soon. None of the other stories i'm reading seem to update often enough for me. heh. neways, keep up the good work... ^_~
| Reviewed By: NakedFlowers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, so far I really like this fic, I think it has great promise to be both exciting and funny. I like the originality of the piece, but at times feel that it is going a little slow, your chapters are longer, but at times seem like they could go further for all of the words in them. That is not to say that I don't like it or that I'm trying to be rude or say you should change your style of writing, just my opinion. I enjoyed the story thus far, loved the cliffy, love how you're portraying character thoughts and can't wait for the next chapter! NakedFlowers
| Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: December 24, 2007 09:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, the story's pretty good, not many grammatical errors, etc.(you have no idea what a pet peeve that is) I like the route you're taking it and can't wait to see the progression. I do, however, need to tell you that whatever issues you have with this "Megan" person really shouldn't have any bearing on putting up new chapters or discontinuing a story. Fine you don't like her, but putting a disclaimer in every chapter about it makes an author look very immature. Considering how many constructive reviews you've received you should focus on the positive reviewers rather than someone you obviously don't like. Your readers are here for "your" story not to hear about disputes between you and your reviewers. I only say this because I believe constructive criticism should be taken as a means to help an author grow. I do hope you continue honing your craft and learn to ignore those who's goal it may be to irritate you enough to gain mention in your chapters. If that is indeed her goal she has greatly succeeded. Good luck with all future endeavors :)
| Title: You're Back!
Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: December 21, 2007 01:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you're back! I was wondering if you were going to drop your fanfics. I'm glad you didn't. And, no, I don't expect a dozen updates all of a sudden... :P Though, a few wouldn't hurt! Just... promise you'll finish your stories and I'll be happy with that! :D I can't wait for your next updates! For ALL of your stories! XP
| Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 17:10 EST
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Wow. This has turned out to be amazing. I really hope that you update soon! I'll fave this and check my mail everyday for an update message, so, if not just for me, update for all of your adoring fans!
| Reviewed By: zenfluence On: December 18, 2007 22:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't say for anyone else, but I've liked this story from the beginning... I found the plot innovative compared to other repetitive plost.... ~may creativeness fly your way (or something of that nature XD)
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