| "Without a Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Title: AWW!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 12:02 EST
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Poor Kags ! Well keep writing i'm seriously into this sfic so keep up the good work!
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Title: Without a Lullaby
Reviewed By: zim00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 14:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a sweet story, keept writing. I want some FLUFFY ACTION. I love you
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Reviewed By: sessy_girl1514 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 21:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 13 was so good keep it up please!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 13:44 EST
Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon!!!! Please! Its like at a cliffy PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE! grrrr...please! It was an awsome chapter and I loved the song...even though i didnt hear it...lol...update!!!
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Title: *Snff*
Reviewed By: Artemis_Vampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 16:29 EST
Comment/Review:
So kawaii...write more you must!!
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Artemis_Vampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 17:20 EST
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I love this fanfic!!! It is soooooo kawaii, and so....I dunno...ummmmm....anyway, keep writing, you rule at it! I am sooo faving this!!!!
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Title: Without a Lullaby
Reviewed By: zim00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 16:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are very original and you show high intelligence using words and grammar. Continue, I wish to see if Kagome and Sesshomaru find love.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 03:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashasheart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you're doing a wonderful job,please hurry and update! I just found this today and have just spent all of my study time reading it all, the story line is captivating to me. I love Inuyasha, but I also love a Sess/Kag pairing too!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 13:29 EST
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Uh so sad!!! I hope the story gets better soon!! its really depressing... wow Rin knew what to do when Sess didnt, now that is an interesting twist... and that ending..Evil Cliffy!!! Grr UPDATE PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Sailor_moon1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 09:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue your story...
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. PLease, update soon
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 21:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: grayfox01 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 17:33 EDT
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I didn't like Kagome getting raped, and the thought of Inuyasha being dead makes me feel very sad. Kagome being around Sesshomaru feels extremely unnatural. You said yourself the story needed major work, that you might "tear the whole thing down and start over." I agree. Sorry to be harsh, but 'm being honest about the way I feel about it.
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 18:04 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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