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Title: An enduring Wo Ai Ni
Reviewed By: Yusagi On: April 30, 2013 06:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted you to know that it's been seven years now (possibly eight, if I was late in reviewing) and I still go back to this fanfic every so often to read it. It is, in fact, the story that comes to mind whenever I think of Hotohori/Miaka fanfiction. It is most certainly one of the best written, most IC, wonderful Hotohori/Miaka works in existence for this neglected couple. I do sort of wish there were sequels to this, even now, but as it is...it really is lovely. I thought you might like a revised review of this fic, since I just dropped in to read it again, having thought of it first when I decided to go looking for Hotohori/Miaka works once again. |
Reviewed By: Mitsuki-ichan On: August 19, 2008 01:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
definitely one of the best i've read! the ending was good! :D
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Title: again, and again
Reviewed By: doomprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 02:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading this fic for about the bazillionth time, I came to the horrifying realization that I had not done my fangirl duty after reading such a spectacular piece of fiction and review it. I will start with that if I could I would rate this higher than a 10, alas I can not so from me at least add some 0s to that 10. The descriptions are amazing and leave me panting. I love that this is done in a tender way, not crude or harsh or dirty but with a gentle desire and hunger that is precious. Hopefully that made some sense. The characters are fun, again the detail amazing. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading it again and again and again. It is now a standard in my fanfiction reading and has been for some time. Most come off lacking. then i brake this one out, read this again to clean my pallet, and then go hunting again.
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Title: woah... just... woah.
Reviewed By: Azshara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was... phenomenal. I laughed, I cried, I got suprisingly horny! Definately adding this to my favorites!!!
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Reviewed By: Kano-chan On: August 20, 2006 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a beautiful fanfiction. I really enjoyed reading it. Your writing style is captiving, it was like a spell was put on me and I couldn't stop reading. The dream was very hot and ^###^ gahhh HOT!! But I'm sure that without your style of narration I wouldn't have enjoyed it as much. I hope you will delight me with more of your fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: Yusagi2003@yahoo.com On: May 19, 2006 16:45 EDT
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That was beautiful! Wonderful! For a bit I thought it was going to be just a dream, and life would go on as normal...but the last twist was brilliant! XD You...um...illustrate things so graphically, and as a result you convey such convincing emotions that...you just wanna cry at the end. I love it. ^_^
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Title: Oh Meh Gawd
Reviewed By: ritsu4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Whoa, man...
Reviewed By: Phony_Osakan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa... XD omg, that was fantastic. My only complaint: You don't tell us how the rest of it goes! *cries* Well... not like we don't know anyway, but it'd be nice to read about it! But oh man, the dream actually being real? Like Lina Inverse the Dramata said - kicked ASS. That was AWESOME. Mmm... Hotohori tied up... *evil laughter*
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Title: SPICY
Reviewed By: PureAngel On: February 23, 2006 03:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was sooo hot! seriously, i think u should write more lemons of the PERFECT and LOVED pairing. i mean, i lyk tamahome and miaka and miaka and Hotohori. i gotta say, dat was a hot intense romance goin on! hope u make a sequel about their 'honeymoonn' hehehe. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Theyeta On: December 31, 2005 14:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... *jaw drop* that was amazing. i can't think of anything else to say except that i hope you have more that i can read like this, lol.
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: Lina Inverse the Dramata On: November 11, 2005 06:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your writing, it didn't sound like it was coming out of a twelve year old, you made it a mix of erotic and endearing. And lets face it... It was Hotohori and Miaka... WAHOO! It's too bad I'm having such a hard time finding these type of stories. I enjoyed the twist of having the dream actually being a real thing. THAT kicked ass. So yes, I loved the character interaction, how way you portrayed their thoughts, and well... a tied up Hotohori on the bed.... always a pleasing thought ^_~
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Title: Made me blush
Reviewed By: Reviewer10010 On: October 21, 2005 18:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An intense well wrote story, hope these a sequal. Loved the pairing.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Tasukisfoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good!! all though i don't enjoy this pairing as much as miaka tasuki pairings, it was good!! make a seqeul please!! but it was very very erotic
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Title: HOT!!!
Reviewed By: HomicidalPinkPenguin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sexy, do we get a sequal maybe the wedding night.
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Reviewed By: darkmage009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 01:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
ITS GOOOD!!!! TWO THUMBS UP!
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