| "Through the Looking Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 20:54 CST
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Heeey, that was so great! But but... wwwhhhyyyyy Kiiikkkyyoooo????!!!! Ahh, she gives me the creeps! AnyBOB: (i think i say that too much) Your story is still "da bomb" (such an old frase) and I reeeaalllleeehhh hope you update soon! ^_^ (I hope Inu and Kag run into each other whilst on thier dates...heh) PS: Thank you so much. :D
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 14:16 CST
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Noo! Bad Kagome bad! No Kouga! Inu good, kouga bleah... well... for me kouga blea... Frankly I think he's too full of himself. Anybob ^^': Happy writting and WHAT WILL HAPPEN!? Ooo, the suspense...
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Title: HAZZAH!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 21:06 CST
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noooo!!!! NOT A CLIFFY!!!! *mumbles* grah, i hate those little buggers... *ahem* anybob: UPDATE MORE PLZ!!!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 15:15 CST
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More reviews from me! ^_^ I love your story! You need to write more and fast! UPPPDDDAAATTTEEEE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silnery On: December 06, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. I like the twist you've taken with this fic. I would suggest a little more detail in the characters actions, I'm still wondering about Myoga, how did he get there? Can anyone else go through the well into the present? Also it's moving a little too fast, just when you are about to set the mood a scene ends. I loved the idea of Kagome and Inu up in the tree, sweet. Kepp up the good work these are only suggestions and I'll wait for your next chapter eagerly.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's the love! You asked for it, and you got it! Nice story, really good! I loved it so far, I hope you continue! ur on my favorites list!
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Reviewed By: Hakun On: November 30, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just started reading the stories and they're really well writen. I think Inuyasha would be more of a football person. He'll get to knock people down and not get in trouble for it. lol
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Reviewed By: eIvin On: November 08, 2005 17:48 CST
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good chap and as for the sport running back in football would def suit him
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Reviewed By: Rice-Ball247 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_- meeeh...please update soon!! i love it!
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Reviewed By: elvin On: November 02, 2005 20:59 CST
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so far really good story. if u are looking for other good reads id recoomend the purity series, suicide rain, and the edge of seventeen they are good fics that come to my mind. keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: November 02, 2005 18:51 CST
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yay!! you updated!! xD MORE SOON okies?? ^_^ pwease? lol. NICE job! keep going!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon (not signed in) On: October 30, 2005 22:34 CST
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This is a cute story so far. I hope you do choose to continue with it. And for it being your first story, your doing fairly well with the characters personalities. Inuyasha and Kagome (Miroku too, I must admit, lol) are just fun characters to write about, aren't they? I've been writing fanfiction for this series since...2001? Something like that...and I'm obviously not gone yet! So perhaps we'll be seeing more stories from you for a quite a while to come as well. Have fun and keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 28, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant believe you haven't gotten more reviews. This is a great story. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: October 17, 2005 20:29 CDT
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w00t!!! another great chapter!! more soon please! xD
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 16:24 CDT
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wow!!! great story! really interesting. xD lol. :) i truly hope you continue. ^_^ I'll favorite you so that i can keep track. hehe. btw, don't let the lack of reviews get to you. :) people seem to review more slowly here, lol. or at least, compared to fanfiction.net it seems that way. don't let that stop you from writing!! there are people who want more! like me! xD write more soon!
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