| "The One Who Heals My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sammi(samantha) On: October 14, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i lub this story and i know most of the music u uesed to its an awesome story so plaese add more thax Ja ne ttyl
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't mid this review... it don't mean anything
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Title: SWEET!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: October 12, 2005 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a fun story!!! I just love all the new stories that find them 500 yrs later...And as far as I can see it I think you will do fine with your next chapter..everything I've read so far is awesome! Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: michael22 On: October 12, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great so far and the idea is a bit different which is nice.As for the lemon the story lead you to it so you should enter it now or thestory won't flow properly. Besides practice makes perfect right.
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Reviewed By: Mysterium [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 23:53 CDT
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The story idea is good. The style of writing, spelling and originality is good. The only thing is... there's not much emotion, even though they've just met after years of seperation. I can't buy into it.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: October 11, 2005 14:45 CDT
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awww...yay for updates!!! hehehe. very kawaii!! i loved the story of how they all came together, it wasn't just pieced together as a lot of people like to do or strung together over time, everything is right up front. now, i want to know just who inu fights. hehe...oh...inu in leather and singing...my day is so complete!!!!
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Title: this is the writter
Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 03:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wanna say thanx for all the reviews. And I'm sorry about the whole thing with the pic. The URL is http://www.deviantart.com/view/7738149/ That should take you right to the pic.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 00:18 CDT
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...interesting story thus far. really cute with the enterance of the band as the family and also for inu as the uncle. but...err...how is it that inu was the only one NOT to hug Kagome (next to sesshiles) when they got to teh dressing room? lol. i loved teh song choice, as well!!! i always hear Iris and can't help but feel swept away by belief that inu could so pull it off!!!
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Reviewed By: BlueZinthos On: October 10, 2005 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
arrrggghhh you didn't just end it there?? wait of course you did. he just wants to talk to kagome alone right? and what does he mean she LIKED seeing him!! after 500 years he still doesn't get it?? OF COURSE she LOVED seeing him again the BAKA. okay. in case you can't tell i love the story! smiles:) keep it up.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 10, 2005 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a very cute story. Please update as soon as you can. I, too, want the answers to Kagome's questions.
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: October 10, 2005 16:46 CDT
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Why are Kagome and Inuyasha acting like it's no big deal to see each other again in chapter 5? He doesn't even do anything when she goes back stage. And why isn't Kagome mad at him for not letting her know he was still alive? She went a year without him and he knew she was there all the time? He's acting like a dick. I hope he has a good reason for it.
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Reviewed By: Sara R On: October 10, 2005 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the story. At first I didn't know if I would like it, but I love it and can't wait to read more:)!!!!!!!!
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Title: EVILLL...but a good evil :)
Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRR!!!!! WHY'D YOU HAVE TO STOP?!?!?! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! *pouts* It's just soooo frustrating. But I find it funny... That these college students like to listen to "old men", even if they didn't know that they were that old. But I'm really liking you story so far. PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON!!! (btw, I couldn't find that picture that inspired you...would you give a more direct url?)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 02:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think that you would get more reviews if you didn't limit reviewing to only people that are logged in. I'm too lazy to log in most of the time and I think most people are that way too, so they can't review your story. Anyway, I hope you update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Mimori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
awww keep writing!!!! it is really good!
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