| "Who Are You?" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: frapp freck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, damn you!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: eIvin On: November 14, 2005 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
great story so far
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Title: wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: frapp freck [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good I found a cople of grammer errers but it was awsome (like a****s said he doesb't say so many swear word tone it down our not I don't care) muahahahahaha- she u at schoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
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Reviewed By: mizushoubai On: November 09, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNED good fic!!! XD
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Title: ~*~2nd and 3rd chapter~*~
Reviewed By: kouga On: October 30, 2005 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found a couple of spelling mistakes that were missed to be check over...i think if one of your friends,aivilo, forgot to check it. over all pretty good!!!!^-^ ......kouga... *_*
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Reviewed By: jet_titan On: October 30, 2005 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that it was pretty good for a first fan fic. Maybe a little too much profanity but it was awesome.
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Reviewed By: kougalvesme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good tabby but to many sware words....inuyasha doesn't sware so much. over all pretty good!!!!^-^ ......kouga...(i know who you are.. i know where you live... i know your middle name... i know who you like!!!!!) *_*
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Title: Review,baby, yeah!
Reviewed By: Joe Force On: October 28, 2005 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm sure you know who this is, and I have a mouthful for you. Your stories lack (a) paragraphs and(b) a mild cencorship. Also, for those of us without cable TV, please try to explain what these creatures look like, and why the hell this kids so horney. He sounds like he would rape someone the first chance he got! Please, keep it in your pants! Ok, look, I'm not trying to be harsh, but you could be doing better. Try reading some other books and looking at the writing styles, how they introduce characters and how they talk with one another. I don't like these stories at all, but there is potential there. I have a good eye for that. Just keep working at it, you might have a book worth reading in, maybe, three years time. P.S. If I see any sex scenes on these, or if there is a refrence to me in there, I WILL be pissed off. Other than that, you can go ahead and kill off the 'light romance'. Have him go berzerk, gang rape her, and throw her body into a gutter. That usually works.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 23, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate Kinky-hoe ,too!I had to skip over the part with her or I would have thrown-up.I love romance seens just not between them.Please update!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: October 11, 2005 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wtf? Kikyo needs an ass whooping. People can't be controlled and she's a dead beesh anyways. Yah, I don't really like her in these kinds of fics as you can tell.
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Reviewed By: frapp freck [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: HotAngelFromHell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
what happened!!! why did you stop right there!!!! you need to continue with this great story!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: frapp freck [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story Writemore and tell that loverly editor of yuor' to think of some more stuff. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) very creative :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :):( :( :( :( :) :)
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